| Ahhhh... I soooo much agree with you. (does this make sense? Sorry, I'm being lazy... haven't done anything with my keyboard for such a long time...)
Your parody is just too accurate... and sometimes, I'm desperate to find something even readable (from my point of view...), and I'm not even speaking a bout the plot (or lack thereof...)
And you're not even beginning to poke fun at... Titles... summaries... (ugh!)
Anyway, good job Lass. I always enjoy what you write, at least. I know it'll be a good reading material if you're being the author. So, well, I'm grateful about that. ;)
Dewa mata
oksana (Chapter 6) - Thu 02 Jul 2009
| I would love to see your view on popular portrayal of sex. I probably would need a diaper before reading it :D
| Yeah . . . I hate the author's notes. (a/n: It bugs the crap out of me!)
stomponfrogs (Chapter 5) - Wed 24 Jun 2009
| LOL @ Kirai's review. I think he or she totally missed the point of this. XD
Anyways, I love the idea of what you're doing, and I have to say that the first and fourth chapters were my favorite. ^^ I'm a bit of a spelling and grammar Nazi, so to see those mistakes had me cringing. Another idea you could possibly do is when authors tend to make those random POV changes all over the place.
Well, keep up the good work! I'll be looking forward to the next chapter. :D
Jupe (Chapter 4) - Wed 24 Jun 2009
| Augh, I HATE it when people misuse words like that. xD One of my pet peeves is the word 'taut.' Sometimes people say that she pulled the bowstring 'taunt,' or that his body snapped 'taunt' when they really mean 'taut.' It... it just really bothers me. |D Also, Conscious vs Conscience vs Consciousness.
Now, off to read chapter 5!
Shannon (Chapter 4) - Wed 24 Jun 2009
| This one had me bubbling with mirth!
| Lol... I loved the fourth chapter the most. I was laughing so hard that I kept reading the same line which made me laugh more. But I managed to keep it together enough to finish it. This makes me want to go back through my stories and make sure I'm not an offender. Though I think I can confidently say I've never felt the need to insert random author notes. They annoy me way too much to put up with reading those sort of stories... you have captured so many of the no no's an author should watch out for. I do have a suggestion. Perhaps you could make one of those chapters where you don't understand a thing that is going on because there are too many time jumps. I don't remember any titles that do this that you could use for an example since they are never memorable stories... but I know there are a few out there.
ZOMG! I love this! Authors make so many irritating mistakes. You should have a chapter where they play out the cliche rape thing and they're all like 'we're so together now!'
The giant wall of text! The unmarked dialogue!! "Personally I prefer it when a wench follows me and she writhes under me, but to each their own." *dies laughing*
You forgot the constant mispelling of Sesshomaru's name, dialogue with no quotes at all, and the famous Mary-Sue.
Even at *my* Mary-Sueist, I didn't do any of this. LOL This is great stuff, keep it coming.
And remember kiddies, the 'ENTER' key is your friend. ^_^
lol my thoughts exactly!!
My pet peeves of fanfiction, you wrote about it!
You're too awesome!! Besides, it's hilarious =)
ZOMG!!! You have just hit three of the MOST annoying things in all of fanfiction world. And with such grace, wit and charm! Now, I'm sincerely hoping to see more of my pet peeves parodied and pilloried... YOU ROCK! :-) ~~Wiccan~~ PS - If you want any ideas, let me know... I have FILES full of them! *snicker* Yes, I am obsessive/compulsive when it comes to that stuff.
lol, that does sound quite disturbing. lol "to each his own," rofl. I think that youkai needs a dictionary. :)
Kirai (Chapter 2) - Tue 09 Jun 2009
| By the way, i really do like this and i get what you are doing I do!! Promose, reading the other reviews i fell like and idiot but still....sorry!!!! And everything.
Kirai (Chapter 2) - Tue 09 Jun 2009
| ok i gotta say a couple of things. First the first chapter was ok. It could have been expanded soo much more, like starting off with a confrontation between Kagome and Kikyo, then getting into the dead clay pot.
Second, there is no way that the second chapter is long enough at all. There is a minimum word coudn on chapters i believe. I think its 700 words. Now the thing with kagome's friends? I hated how you took all their comments and jumbled it into one paragraph! There is nothing i hate more than that coming from an author. It is not correct writing format and drives me up a wall.
Hun, i think that you would be a really good writer, if oyu just expanded on what you were going to write, showed things and spread it out. It may be boring at some points but its worth it in the long run. Good luck, i think you have a lot of potential. Just work at it a bit more.
| Alright!!! I've been wondering when someone would have enough nerve to point out the OH SO OBVIOUS and make something fun out of it AND in the meantime giving others a clue...oops! I meant a tip on what not to write. This is going to be a fun ride and I'm in need of little fun right now. Rock On, ML!!! JEN
Lol, I have a feeling that I'm going to really enjoy this series. I mean really, dead clay pot? What kind of insult is that? It's like, "You're a dead clay pot, that's right, I said it!" .... "Ouch, my pride?"
~TWLOAP
Yes! THANK YOU!
I've always hated the "dead clay pot" thing. Seriously? It's like a kid calling another kid meanie-face.
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