Not bad. Good character progression so far. It was nice to see Sesshoumaru relax a bit as long as you don't have him doing so back home. With a threat around he kind couldn't huh? So the break was a good idea. Sesshoumaru would have known what fireworks were however since they were invented in China in 1100 they also invented a more basic form of ice cream that he would have known.

That was really touching between Kagome's mother and father XD (although I'm not sure if that's Kagome's mom's actually name x..x; but don't worry it doesn't bug me as much XD) MUST READ MORRRE. x3 I really want to know what happens :D <3 Plox and thankk yoooh~~

WOW!!!!!! Do you know how to write a hook! So far I am in love with this story and I hope I can see it completed one day. ~Lady Mikazuki

Sorry about not reviewing for the other chapter! (it was really good XD) Wow Sessho's went OOC there for a second o..0 crying?? XD Who knew the cold-hearted 'Killing Perfection' would have a golden heart? :3 Please keep up the good work ^^ I want to know what happens next XD

Oooh, I'm glad the healer isn't Ayame. I hate that snotty wolf girl...

Awesome chapter! I had almost forgotten how Kagome and Sesshomaru were going through more and more trauma every time they were apart.

That chapter was humorous, but not stupidly so. Just the right amount of amusing, without being ridiculous. And the interaction between Kagome and Sesshomaru is VERY romantic. I like it. You are very good at describing kissing and cuddling, it is perfect.

Nice interaction between the characters, I like the way Miroku and Kagome's relationship is shaping up. I loved it when Miroku appeared wearing a wacky helmet. That was a good one!

Another excellent chapter! I admire the way you are portraying Miroku, it is creative, yet true to his character in the manga and anime. And the way Sesshomaru was with Kagome after they admitted their love for each other, that was sooo sweet!

Oooh, I like the way you brought Miroku into the story as well. He is a handsome monk, isn't he? That was very cute, and well-written.

Having Kagome read "Wuthering Heights" was very clever of you! And I love Kouga. You made him very attractive and mysterious in your story. It's funny, I wasn't sure if I liked your story very much at first, Kagome's hair was chestnut in the earlier chapters, then changed to black. But suddenly, things really began to happen, and the story became very interesting, and and things began to fall together. Now I am a big fan! I really am fascinated now, and I still have more to read... Hurray! On to the next chapter.

WOOOOO!! they told everyone! :) im so happy! woo! >:3 my pervy mind is working on the mating right now, so yush! lmao I seriously can't wait until the next chapter! this is a brilliant story!

I like it I like it cant wait for the next chapter

I can't wait for the actually mating to take place. Im just counting down the chapters, hoping it won't take too long. The story just is just becoming compact and full of action and I love it. I can't wait to read what happens next. til next time :)

"Take me kind sir, I just simply can't seem to keep my skirt on!" OMG! I absolutely LOVE this line!!!

omg...omg...omfg....give us more girl!!! LOTS more.. 19 chapters just aint cutin it!! UPDATE!!

Just started on this tonight so I'm only on chapter 2, I like it so far although you do have some goofs, 1 is Tetsuiga, the 'correct' spelling is either Tessaiga (Japanese version) or Tetsusaiga (goofed up VIZ version). I've seen lots of different spellings of various characters names but I've never seen Kaede spelled with an i before. On to chapter 3...

yayayayayayaya! That was.. uhm.. wow. lots of minor citrus. :3 yummy. lol. SO i cannot wait until the next chapter!

awesome story i cant wait for the upcoming chapters.

Hey! *wave* [in a happy mood today :) which is shocking since it's before noon lol] I really love this story. The way it's developing is really good. I thought that their relationship might've been going a bit fast but the last two chapters have explained that to me :). Can't wait to read more! I also voted for you as well :).