It's her fault? iT's HeR FAuLT?!?!?!?! SHE SHOULD BE CANONIZED!!!! (Let's take a moment to appreciate the irony of a lovely lass named Wiccan being canonized... okay) FOR REAL... this story took my breath away. How is it that we are our own worst critics when a gem like this is written? I was so moved by this fic I favorited it only a third of the way through my first read. And I read it three times before reviewing because I was that deeply struck and that entranced by every careful, beautiful word. The emotion you create in this piece is by turns soft and sharp, and leaves a lasting impression. Thank you sooooooooooo much for giving this another chance and posting it. It is timely and timeless. Bra-to-the-fucking-vo.
Very touching. I think you did a great job.
That was powerful Miss K and well written! Kudos to you!
This was such an emotional and lovely piece - highly realistic too, at the very same time. I think what I liked about this was how you included the details of the manga/anime, yet you had your own unique perspectives of them. Well done!
Yes, I accept complete and total responsibility for this being allowed to stay up long enough to garner some readers and at least a couple reviews. I think it deserves it - COMPLETELY. For someone who professes not to write angst very well, I think this was exceptionally well-done. And we all know that I've read at least my fair share of ALL types of fics, sooo, I think I can figure out when something deserves to be seen. Thank you so much for posting it for me... and for everyone else who gets the chance to read it now!!! ;-) ~~me~~
Miss K I love this oneshot a lot, it's so emotional without making Sesshoumaru seem unrealistic. I think you did a fabulous job. Not only is it amazing in the creative sense but it really makes a person think about their own father and how much they may take him for granted. I wanted to tell you that I think this is a wonderful piece and I want to thank Wiccan for convincing you to repost the story. To the greatness that you really do write.
Khrystyne
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