Hi, love your story.It's been very original to me so far. Great foreshadowing in the last chapter 8. It definitely makes you dread whats going to happen to Kuro-chan. keep up the good work
sunset in love (Chapter 8) - Mon 07 Sep 2009
please... you are not going to turn her into a 'monk' now, do you? i really love kagome as the brash yet polite girl she is (emphasize on the girl), with girlish mordern skirt (very revealing to the daiyoukai) and very outspoken... it's so unbecoming of her to be quiet... and too polite...., please... let me have my kagghieee.... by the way, this is one of the best fic i have ever read!
stars (Chapter 8) - Mon 07 Sep 2009
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OMG! Poor Kagome! But at least it gets her little butt in gear to prepare. But with Naraku coming that will be fun....not. Hmmm. Wonder what Jiji will do when he learns of this. Not of the good. Mm-mmm. I can't wait to see the looks on the monks faces when she leaves or even better if Jiji and Shippou show up to collect her/help her if Naraku shows up and she glomps them six ways from Sunday. LOL. That will be a sight to see. It would be hilarious. Wow. Third year of college. I'm only in my sixth month! Of course I'm only going for 20 month training program but still! Have fun! Study hard and don't forget to have fun!
sunset in love (Chapter 7) - Fri 28 Aug 2009
are you telling us that the temple of light will be attacked? oh my... and kag training will be cut short (this one is better)... plese update soon or your fan is sure gonna make a fanfiction out of this your fic :-), by the way, it's a great fic, but please make inuyasha eat his words kay...
darktopaz (Chapter 1) - Fri 28 Aug 2009
I can't wait for more
stars (Chapter 7) - Fri 28 Aug 2009
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haha I liked Kuro reaction the best. I'm glade Kagome will be able to contact them and I love the scene between Kuro and Jiji. Kagome reactions to everything is great. I love how she was concentrating and stuck her tounge out. nice quirk. >.< I do that sometimes. lol Can't wait to see what happens.
Uh oh!! Kuro is in some shit. LOL!! Kagome seems to be on the way to speaking with JiJi. Please don't make her a demon or have her change into a demon. Keep her humanity. Another great chapter in the Arc.
Lady Lillian (Chapter 6) - Tue 25 Aug 2009
It should be interesting to see how Kagome responds to this type of "training" her morals are ingrained and I at least thing she would rather die then give them up and in honesty I think her character would turn south if she were beaten and she would probably end up broken and not stronger but it will definitely be interesting to read love the story thus far can't wait for next installment
GAH! Bald! ;_;
And the future looks painful for Kagome. *winces*
I'm excited for to see what happens. AND YAY for the Sessh. part. and O_o! bout kikyou's death arrow. creepy. good job.
She's not going to come out of this hating all youkai is she? That would so go against her character. Thanks for the wonderful update! Can't wait to see what training she goes through. How long will this arc be?
Okay awesome, I feel bad for Kagome but it is for her own good, to shave her head!! I hope this doesen't change her to much, I like the way she holds life dear, maybe she can teach the monks a little something as well. Excellent chapter, I almost cried with Kagome. I love the idea of her being trained by monks and I like how they don't like the idea of what they have to put her through, shows they have compassion but they have to follow orders for the Kami knows best. I can't wait for more, your version of Kagome is good, she's strong. Will Shippo and Jiji know that she is alright? I hope so. Please don't let them take away her view of demons, and of life. I can't wait for more. Write on!
Much Love
InuAngel
Wow! What are those monks gonna do to Kagome? Will they really keep her there for 6-8 months? Please update again soon! I can't wait to read what happens next.
stars (Chapter 6) - Mon 24 Aug 2009
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Whoa... that was QUITE the shocker!!!!! Temple of Light, hah! Bet Kags doesn't look at it that way right now. Sheesh, I surely didn't see THIS coming. And I'm intrigued by the sense of "wrongness" that everyone is feeling around Inu and Kikyou - hmmm, what's up there? I will TRY to wait patiently with everyone else to see what happens next. I mean, I know other people have lives that involve things other than fan fiction, but it'll be hard! Thanks so much for a most interesting chapter - it certainly livened my evening reading! :-) ~~Wiccan~~
i really love this story!
i have a question thought.
i know that it was normal for the monk and everything but why shave kagome's head? In 6 months she will leave right? even if they were to not shave her again during her stay, she won't have much hair after that training! :/ won't be pretty at all! well, maybe you have a trick up your sleeve! will have to wait and see! I still hope she won't change too much because of her training, or at least, her way to see youkai.
i think I won't like what will happen to kagome in the next chapter! *sniff* poor poor kagome!
can't wait to see what will happen next! please, update as soon as you can!!
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