I love this chapter. It was really entertaining. The evil man has finally come. I hope that Sesshomaru will not think Kagome weak because of this insident. Hopfully he will have posessive thoughts of Kagome and does not fight his desire to be near her. Please update soon.

Wonderful writer you are!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Your cliffhangers SUCK btw but its ok. You always bring something more interesting to the table. Keep on writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

you did extremely well adding in Kagomes feelings! And the evil man finally makes an approach! It would be cool to have a twisted fate for him. I'm excited to see how you will make the change to the next area for Kagome and Sesshoumaru. Maybe you could make their great change as the island starts to sink?....

woo keep the updates coming! can wait to see what happens next!")

Bath Time!! Everyone run in before he leaves!! hah. Another Chapter I really enjoyed. I like how you added in the part about Kagome's power now being fully unsealed and how Sesshoumaru likes the Atlantis wine. Hopefully in the next chapter we meet the freak who wants to impregnant Kagome. I think our fluffy isn't going to like this guy one bit. Maybe a head might be severed!

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I can't wait for that cretin to make his move. Then Sesshoumaru will kill him! :) Yes, he should most definitely die.

Hmmm. Yep. Not bad at all. It would probably be even better if you took a little more time to tell us about the emotional context. Take your time, you're not in a hurry to update, re-read each chapter four or five times and use a little more descriptions. Letting us imagine what's going on is good, but you can stimulate our imagination a little more if you want, too. It's all about balance. The story is good, but one can improve each and every day to reach perfection, even though it's impossible to attain (in my opinion). I hope my review will not be too confusing, it was only meant as a little help from reader to writer ;) Dewa mata

Oh I really liked this chapter you should be proud of it :)

You did a wonderful job with this chapter so do not worry over it. I am enjoying what you have created. It is different and exciting. Please update soon.

please do update as soon as posible. i love it and your doing great. keep it coming ")

Other than the expect cliffy, I didn't find anything that bothered me. But I am starting to get used to and even like your cliff hangers lol. Can't wait for the next chapter. :)

oh I like it! I like it a lot. I think Kagome's going to go crazy to save the kid in the next chapter. Of course Sesshoumaru will have to save both ahha. But maybe they will find a pearl on the way to save the son?

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I liked this chapter. Its showing a conflict that may potentially rise concerning the first holy man, also I am very anxious to find out what exactly that lady was yelling about. I sense some heroic actions and more worship coming on. Great chapter :)

I don't know about military drills, but I can say I like your story very much this far. The plot seems original and has peeked my interest. Kagome and Our Favorite Pompousness are very in character, and that's nice (it's my pet peeve usually, I hate those 'Super-heroin Kagome' and 'love-sick puppy Sesshomaru' you get to see in loads of fanfictions...) I'm eager to read more. :D Dewa mata

One thing that really got me was the fact that they're still wearing the bed sheet cover. I don't think I missed the part where they dressed (or had clothes brought in) but I could be wrong. And do they end up nude everytime they travel? Just something to keep in mind. Also, this chapter seemed a little rushed There wasn't much detail I don't think. But I like the plot and I like Sesshomaru(I spelt his name wrong I know). He seems really stubborn about it all, but can't do a thing about it. I look forward to the next chapter.

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please update. i like the story alot!! and i would like to see more chapters. ")

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