this is the second time I have read this story and I still love it. I think it such a lovely story even if poor rin died she still got a second chance at life. this time with two parent to love her always.
I've really enjoyed this story. The change of perspective was jarring, but enjoyable. I realise formatting like line breaks can be a problem with some sites and I've heard others complain of difficulties on Dokuga. I loved the first person perspective from all of the characters, especially and surprisingly Jaken. Thanks for sharing Your work and talents with us.
where is da lemons haha. love your writing style
I LOVED this story! It was fluffy and warmed my heart more than any story I've read thus far. I will be looking into your other stories as well and I hope they are as enjoyable as this one was.
I know it has been a long time since you have posted this story here. After reading so many stories; I decided to start at the end of the mature section to re-read the ones I have not in a very long time. I was surprised to find this one, which I had not had the pleasure of reading yet; although I do not know why. I must say that there are few stories that move me to tears and really make an impact on me. I am fortunate to say that yours has done just that. I thank you for having the courage and inspiration to write this, as this is one of few that I believe encompasses the characters true being on what they are to symbolize and represent. I am truly greatful for your work, and I am now going to have it listed in my favorites so that I can read it again. I apologize that I could not have read this earlier and tell you how wonderful and surreal this story is. To make a long story short; I want to say that I absolutely loved it. While there are a few grammatical and structural errors; those do not matter all that much in the way the story impacted me.
Thank you
Magnoliaskies
that was a wonderful story. thank you for sharing this
Dying is mispelled as dieing. other than that, a great re-read.
--Kaminoko (c)2011
I loved this story. Thanks It was great.
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