awesome story

I enjoyed it very much!! Thank you.

its sad it only a one-shot

loved it! if you want i could be a beta for you, if you want to. it's up to you.

I liked it it was very good but I I think it would be even better if you added a chapter were inuyasha come's to get her but thats only what I think

Well, to start with, It was hot and I very much enjoyed it!! I do feel, however, that Sesshoumaru's feelings, etc. needed a bit of work. I know that it is a one shot and you can only do so much, but it just did not seem like him, i guess... I do appreciate your unique style and in all honesty, I find myself wondering what happens next? Ah, oneshots tand to give me that feeling sometimes... Anyway, Thanks for writing and if you are interested, i beta so PM me if you need help/editing, etc.

I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^_^

you did a fantastic job, i do hope you do another fanfic cuz i really like your writting style ^_^

~Skippy~

WHOA! Awesome beginning! I liked it all the way through!!!!!