| Oh my gosh! That was awesome! You're very talented! Please write more!please! I'd love to read it!
autumngold (Chapter 3) - Thu 24 Sep 2009
| Why didn't Inuyasha try to get word to Sesshoumaru that the village was in trouble. I bet if Sesshoumaru had known, he never would have left Rin there. I hope that she will be ok. Please let Kagome be able to save her! What a great update! Can't wait to read what you have planned for Kagome next!
stars (Chapter 2) - Mon 14 Sep 2009
| please updata
Drianax (Chapter 1) - Sat 05 Sep 2009
| Great first chapter! I can't wait to see what happens in the upcoming chapters. Update quickly!
| Awesome! Awesome! Awesome!
Great beginning as everyone has said so far - it pulls you write in! This is what a first chapter should be like.
I can't wait for chapter two...
| Ooo, of course you have to end that chapter like that, make me get on the edge of my seat for the next one. :D I can already tell this is going to be a rather interesting story just from this first chapter. Can't wait to read the rest. :D
| Excellent beginning!! I look froward to seeing what happens!
pammy (Chapter 1) - Sat 05 Sep 2009
So far, I'm definitely interested and looking forward to the next installment. Good writing.
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