I like your story! Though I AM a little confused... maybe I'm supposed to be! So, Kagome and Sess had a year long relationship before she was pulled away, during that time she got pregnant and when she was pulled back gave birth to a full human child. Ok that's easy to figure out! I also get how Sess didn't really think the child was his at first... but does he still have any real feelings for Kagome? Did he ever really? I know his normal character is a very cold one, but with Kagome being as warm as she is she couldn't be drawn to something THAT cold even in private. It's almost like he either never really loved her (Inu never REALLY loved her and HE waited the 500 years), or he's really dumb and doubts Kagome's abilities enough to completely NOT believe that the child is his even despite her scent.
Now I'm not even sure if I made sense! Anyway, I'm looking forward to more.
I really like this story. I like how you have the different POV's and that you made the little girl human, not many stories will do that. Can't wait to read more of everyone's past.
Update Soon! :)
>8O!!! Ohhh someone had better lay a beatdown on him for that one.
Sooo anxious to know what inu's big secret is...
*scoots to the edge of her seat and gives author expectant look*
8O Ohhh sh** hit the fan now! So, after all this time, how will these two react? The story has a lot going for it, and I enjoy all these littele elements of intrigue that keep the reader tuned in.
I imagine that would be difficult for someone with an ego that size...
The last part was just too cute. 'My daddy gave me his eyes for my birthday.' XD Tickled me... I'm anxious to see how long it takes him to get over the shock and accept it... and also eager for the eventual make-up between demon and priestess. They will make up... right...?
Hahaha... ohhhhh that's a fun question. 'Daddy, what is sex?' O.o 'Uhhhhh....'
Short chapter, but still an enjoyable read. On to the next!
I really like the little bits of Nozomi's POV you throw in (the stuff about the toothpaste being nasty and all that). It really lets you get inside the mind of the child.
D: Awee I bet she'll take it hard when she finds out about the whole demon/human/hanyou thing. She'll probably think Sesshomaru is disappointed by her. T^T
Still going good! I can't believe you've gotten so few reviews! It's a bloody crime!
Great Sesshomaru depiction. I think you hit the nail on the head with this one.
Bwaahhh! Ohhhh tension! O_o
Anxious to know how this came about, and what Sesshomaru's reaction is going to be. I assume he would be surprised to find out he has a child... but a human child none the less? Hmmm...
helikesitheymikey! (Chapter 6) - Tue 24 Aug 2010
I really doubt Nozomi is completely human because she has too good a sense of hearing...I mean in like chapter1 she could hear her mother's heartbeat accelerating.
plus she's having the weird dreams of the past.
plus I don't think she can be completely human because of her eye color. honestly how many humans have gold eyes?
anyway I wanna see what happens next...and I do bet she isn't completely human.
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
Kaysan (Chapter 5) - Thu 04 Feb 2010
This story presents really interesting. I like how it presents the story from each person's point of view. In fact taking the perspective of Sesshoumaru and Kagome's child is quite interesting and innovative. I look forward to reading more chapters. Keep up the good work.
can't wait to see what else you come up with! Poor Nozomi though, and really Sesshy needs to clean out his ears and listen to Kagome.... let her explain everything about the well and stuff ya know? Anywho can't wait for the next update!
Loving it. I don't know exactly how you are doing it, but you are doing a great job writing this so it conveys the incredible stress of the situation to the reader. I can't wait for more. Real life interferes with our fun way too much!
Is the whole story going to be told from the child's viewpoint? While it's an enjoyable idea, I'd still like to read from an adult's viewpoint, too. There's only so much that can be told from the child's side of a story. A lot of serious and adult details are left out. It's good that background information is being told through her dreams, but those are limited, too.
stars (Chapter 3) - Sat 12 Sep 2009
I really like it can you make it longer. please updata
Loved it! It would be satisfying if the chapters were longer, but that's just because what you DO write is so enjoyable. And I think you put in just enough detail. Too much detail can be a mistake... You are very good at picking out the little details that tell the reader much more than was stated in words...
Sesshomaru's affect is just too strange for a kid to deal with (except Rin). I loved the way you portrayed Sesshomaru. It is very, very realistic, both of how he was portrayed in the original and how I can imagine him behaving in such a situation. It just gave me a nervous feeling in the pit of my stomach. That poor little girl. I'm so glad you updated so quickly, please, do it again! I can't wait for more...
Wow! I just discovered your story, and it's amazing! I really look forward to the next chapter. Update soon! :D
Darcy (Chapter 1) - Tue 08 Sep 2009
Great first chapter!I can't wait to read more!Please please update soon!
This is really interesting, although i would love to see more desciption on what is going on around them. anywho, till next time
Pups
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