i liked it i really did..i think it has a lot of potential to be a good story

I like how you've started this story. Like you said, there are a few things here and there that one wouldn't notice if it was their own work. Already, it seems kinda suspenseful, which caught my attention. Great job!!

That was a pretty good intro. what about Sota or the grandfather? Is she going to try to get them or was the grandfather living someplace else? Did Sota leave to be elsewhere or is he not in this fic?

Poor, poor Kagome. Her stepfather is an absolute creep. I hope that she is able to stay away from him. Please let Sesshoumaru help heal her wounds. She really, really needs someone.