I can't believe that Kagome is going to let Rin go alone. Personally, as a mother, after what she went through this morning, I would be too scared to have her wander away from me agan. At least for awhile. Nice update!
Great story, can't wait for more!
chii (Chapter 8) - Thu 05 Nov 2009
yes, sadly though this chapter had no substance. please update better since i love this story so much
D8 nooooooooooooooooooooooo D8 i hate cliffies *cry*
oh please update soon....
Thank you for updating. I love this story!
Fairqueen (Chapter 7) - Tue 20 Oct 2009
evil evil cliffhanger. nasty author. i love the still hate the cliff. so what do i think of the charactors and the plot line.................next chapter. :)
autumngold (Chapter 7) - Tue 20 Oct 2009
What an evil cliffy! I suppose this means that you will come back immediately to show us Sesshoumaru's reaction?! Please! Hopefully Sesshoumaru has more memories, besides dreams, of Kagome than she has of him. Thanks for the update!
stars (Chapter 6) - Wed 14 Oct 2009
please updata
chii (Chapter 6) - Wed 14 Oct 2009
loving it... so full of intrigue. hope to read more soon
miki (Chapter 5) - Thu 08 Oct 2009
good but how can he think to make a test without the mother approval!!
autumngold (Chapter 5) - Thu 08 Oct 2009
I hope Kagome gets there soon. What is she going to do when she has to see Sesshoumaru again? Poor Rin, is she going to understand what the paternity test is for? Thanks for the update!
I must request that you stop playing games immediately, and write more! Seriously, this is so amazing. Each chapter is better than the last. I love this story. Really, really love it. I am so glad you updated so soon, and I am already itching for more.
I really like the flow of the story so far. Besides a couple grammatical errors, this is a great piece of writing. I will be watching out for further chapters :)
Cute!
miki (Chapter 4) - Wed 07 Oct 2009
I love it please update soon; i want to see the reaction of kagome and shessomaru
autumngold (Chapter 4) - Wed 07 Oct 2009
Thank you for the quick update! Thank goodness for Kaede. As long as she's as kind as she is in the anime, Rin should be fine. I can't wait until everyone meets up with Sesshoumaru. His reactions should be interesting. Can't wait for your next chapter!
Luving it!!!!!
autumngold (Chapter 3) - Tue 06 Oct 2009
I know that you're just kidding and you really didn't leave the chapter like that! I will wait here patiently for the rest of the chapter to be posted. . . . . Ok, well maybe not patiently. . . . I really need to know what's happening, and I just KNOW you wouldn't leave me with such a cliffy. . . . . . . Are you posting the next chapter now? . . . . . . Where are you?!!!! . . . . . Ok, that's it, I've been a good person (today) and I deserve a new chapter!. . . . . . Ok, maybe I lied and I haven't been a good person, but that doesn't mean you can't post more. ;) Please! :) Loved the update! Can't wait for more!
Rin is a clever little girl! Even though you left with a cliffhanger, every little bit is much appreciated!
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