Ahhh, sweet torture. Such a beautiful cliffhanger. I reeeeally don't like InuYasha - the BAKA!
mishomaru (Chapter 5) - Sun 11 Oct 2009
Yay, your story has been getting better with each chapter! Please write more, I enjoy it very much!
Rae (Chapter 5) - Sun 11 Oct 2009
Awesome Chapter!!! *pouts*...except the cliffy. *cries* it was getting so good! This is worse than when they skip to commercial breaks in the middle of a show, becuase I know I have to wait even longer!! Oh well, I can pacify myself with thoughts of what embarrasing statement is going to accidentally fly out of Sesshoumaru's mouth.
cliffies hurt me, each one like a bullet to my brain.... or maybe i'm a melodramatic psychopath... anyway i loved the chapter, please continue to update!
What a delightfully interesting development!
So naughty that you left us at a cliffie! NOT kind.
Oh,well.
I eagerly await the next installment. Huzzah for your talent!
autumngold (Chapter 4) - Sun 11 Oct 2009
I really like this story! Kagome is so brave to save her friends by letting herself fall that way. That would have scared me too much! Hopefully she will be able to heal from her injuries quickly. If Naraku finds her like this she's in deep trouble. More soon please! I can't wait for her friends reactions when they find her!
I really like it, just as an FYI in chapter 4 choked only has 1 'c' not 2. Just curious but was most of the chapter supposed to be in italics or was that just a goof?
This story has been awesome! I love Sesshomaru's comment about having her hands on him. You are doing an excellent job!
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! not a cliffie! they make me want to throw things, anyway this is really awesome and i followed your advice and read your story about Inupapa and Kagome on FF.net, but for some bizarre reason i couldn't review because it kept saying 'the page you are looking for cannot be displayed' and it wouldn't let me view chapter 12! i was ready to break the computer... anyway i loved them both and i look forward to reading more!
Dani (Chapter 4) - Sat 10 Oct 2009
Awww man! I thought there was another chapter up :( Now I'll have to check often to see if it is up. Anyways awesome story!
Well something is deff wrong I just hope that it doesn't get Kagome into to much trouble. I can't wait to see the next chapter
storm (Chapter 2) - Fri 09 Oct 2009
this was great its funny and random in a good way
I've been reading this FF and I so love your stories!! Can't wait for the next chapter! :)
Dani (Chapter 2) - Fri 09 Oct 2009
OMG! I am dying here! This is sooooooo great! I have never read anything like this. Great job and please don't make me wait long for more, please!
Eh heh heh heh. Sesshomaru will probably say outloud beginning of next chapter...,"Should I kill the miko, or flay her alive? Kill or flay, kill or flay?" =D
Anonymous (Chapter 1) - Thu 08 Oct 2009
Excellent beginning. I can sense extreme comedy potential. Please continue!
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