Ive been away so I'm just catching up. THese last few chapters were simply wonderful. My feelings for Kagome still haven't changed. And chapter 16 just reinforced my belief that she's completely wrong for Sessho. Her feelings for Inuyasha are still too strong and as Sess said, it would always be awkward having her around the family, especially if Kikyo was to ever forgive Inuyasha. No woman would want to see the woman who had an affair with her boyfriend/fiance around, no matter how forgiving they were.

Anywho.. I cant wait to see more chapters and I hope both Kikyo and the baby are ok.

Oh no. Poor Kikyou. I hope she'll be okay. Inuyasha is really trying to get her back. Good for him for getting back on track. But it's sad that this happened. And I'm glad that Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru are bonding again. I really like it when they're able to find common ground or when one of them is mature enough to step up. Definitely one of my favorite stories. Keep up the beautiful work and I eagerly await the next chapter.

And thank you a bunch for the reviews on the X-mas challenge. ^^

- CA

I finally gave into my curiosity and read straight through all the chapters tonight.  I normally don't read stories where there are no demons and everyone is human.  It makes the demon characters too bland but the deeply emotional subject matter saved the story.  You made me not like Kagome at all in this story, nor have I felt any sympathy for her.  I felt more emotion for Kikyo and Kaguya.  Sesshoumaru gave up a good thing when he lost Kaguya.  I don't want him and Kagome to get together.  There's too many obstacles between them, some they would not be able to overcome.  Such as, by being Sesshoumaru's girlfriend or wife, she would have to be around his family and friends, and especially Inuyasha and Kikyo.  With her and Inuyasha's history and with what recently happened, I don't see them sitting around the dinner table as one big happy family.  That would be stretching the imagination a bit too much.  Also, Sesshoumaru deserves someone a lot better, someone with a completely free heart. 

Oh no! I really hope they don't lose the baby-I think that would be the end of things between them. If it were me, having Inuyasha around would just be too painful.

Having Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru share that memory was just so sweet :) You do the fluffy parts so well.

Since I didn't get to read the last chapter until now, let me just comment on the lunch meeting as well: To my way of thinking, Kagome should be pursuing Sesshoumaru. I know she's been deeply hurt by Inuyasha but doesn't she realise what she's letting slip through her fingers once again? It seems like she's being a bit of a coward.

How many more chapters do you think there will be? Have you decided on an ending yet?

Two families learn that appearances are not everything and perfection is a delusion?

Aww *sniff sniff* poor Kikyo. Poor Inuyasha. And loving the tender brotherly moments between Inu and Sess. See they don't always have to be at each other's throats. ^_^ Wow this might be the shortest review I've ever left for the story so far, but that doesn't mean I'm not enjoying the story. I really am. Now hurry with the next chapter.... pleeeeeaaaaase. Hmph Sesshoumaru surely told her un!

Come on, don't you think killing someone off is a bit extreem. what a wonderful update.

Aw I'm sad that Kikyo is in the hospital I hope its nothing serious. Anywho I gald Sesshommaru got to see Kagome. I've been waiting on that but they didnt really get to talk things out. Darn! But I hoping they'll see each other again. Thanks for the chpt it was awesome!!

I'm really glad for the update. It's good to see them reunite. I really hope they start being in a relationship soon.

My breath is stolen away once more. I don't even have words... but despite how bittersweet this chapter was, it truly made my day to see the notice in my inbox. It's been a rough day and it was nice to have a little emotional release in the form of me crying a little over this fanfic again. Thank you.

I love the symbolism in the last sentence--or maybe it's just me reading too in between the lines :D Awesome chapter Miss Teak!

Mmm Ramen... now you got me wanting some. I kinda figured they would need more time, but it was a good attempt on his part. At least she even showed up at all I say. I'm happy he asked her outright why she was evading, but damn that phone! Which brings me to my next inquiries... what happened to Kikyo? Is she ok? And OMG I could have just hit Kagome in the face. It's like she's programmed to constantly worry about Inuyasha and not thinking about Sesshoumaru on that matter. Like sure he and Inu are patching things up well, but he's still jealous even just a smidgebit. *sighs* Time will surely tell with them. We will see where it leads them in this awkward situation. I mean I can see it always being awkward. What if she and Sesshoumaru really do get together. And Inuyasha actually do work it out with Kikyo and they do get married. Can you imagine the family get togethers? I mean Kagome will always be seen as the aunt who slept with the uncle way back when and Sesshoumaru the uncle who married the aunt who slept with his brother... Ok yeah I'm thinking too much but it's like after I read this chapter I fell asleep and that was what played out in the dream ^_^ heh heh... me and my dreams. Anywhoozers good job looking forward to the next chapter of this, Wisteria, and Edo Night. I'm trying to prevent myself from reading Underworld for now... waiting for more chapters then I'll read ^_^

At least they are still reaching out to eachother, even if things are awkward now.   Not quite sure why Sesshomaru had to go racing off for the hospital, when InuYasha was already there for Kikyo, leaving Kagome stranded.  I'm glad he at least offered to get her home.  I have this little fear that something is going to happen to Kagome on her way home.  Maybe it is just my love of drama, but...   Can't wait for more!

.. Lol Never thought I'd see Kuchiki mentioned in an Inuyasha based fiction. You had me believing for a moment there that I was back to reading Bleach fanfiction. xD

Hurry up and update. :p

I think I love this chapter because it resolves the Kaguya/Sesshoumaru relationship so nicely and in such a realistic way. Some people break up and they can't be friends afterwards, but sometimes they can. I've said it before, but I feel like Kaguya, so seemingly shallow, is the wisest of the characters in this story. I kind of love her for it. Good on her for encouraging Sesshoumaru's happiness.

I understand warring between being an angel or a devil. I've done it so many times myself. This story could go either way -- though I admit I'm hoping for a happy end. (I'm a sap that way.) But whatever end you go for, I think I'll ultimately be happy with it. You have such great instincts as a writer and I've learned to not second guess you.

Aww, this chapter was so good. I couldn't help but feel the awkwardness at some points, the happiness at others and it all just flowed so well, I loved it! I can't wait for Sesshomaru to finally contact Kagome again :) It'll be exciting to see how things turn out and I'm in suspense as I wait! Much love to you until next time my dear <3 Looking forward to the next chapter!

Perhaps now Sesshoumaru will get his rear in gear and go get his girl?!

Jeez, reading about Kaguya's feelings and sacrifices for Sesshoumaru still makes me tear up. Do you think I would get shot and murdered if I requested this get changed to a Kaguya / Sesshoumaru fic? To heck with Kagome! lolol. Just kidding. Wonderful job. :3 Keep it up.

Beautifully done. I've missed reviewing the other chapters, but I've gotten back into the swing of things. I love how you're moving forward with this. Kaguya is so understanding. I really like how you've made her character in this fic. InuYasha and Sesshoumaru are finally starting to form some little brotherly bond. That's great. I love it when stories do that - bridge the gap between the two of them. And yet, I still don't know how I feel about Kagome. I love happy endings, so I'm still hoping they get together in the end. But I can understand if too much has happened and she can't handle it. But come on, Sesshoumaru! If you work hard enough, you can get the girl! lol

Keep up the awesome work! ^^

- CA

Oh, is he going to be able to salvage this mess? Can one man, this one Sesshoumaru, find the solutions to all life's problems? Boy oh boy, I can't wait to see what happens next!  I would love for a happy ending, but I don't know if you will give us one... So many twists and turns...I can't even begin to predict how this will end!

Your fan,

Inumaru_Rapture