Do you think you can update this story PLEASE

I got about halfway through this before I had to stop. The story itself is pretty interested, but the many grammatical errors and the use of the term "flashback" is a major turn off. I would recommend this be betad.

Excellent!

This was good. I do wish Sessh would've gotten there before Inu touched her. Some friend he is,Inu knew she was dreaming of Sessh since she yelled his name loud & clear & yet even though Inu heard her yell his brother's name & smelled her arousal. He tried telling himself she must be dreaming she's in a fight(yeah right).Then,even as he knew she was dreaming,saying his brother's nickname,while she still smelled strongly of arousal, he had the nerve to take advantage of her in her sleep & when he got caught,he had the nerve to try to blame her for taking advantage of him when he left his tree limb & went to where she was sleeping & dreaming. She was near water,instead of touching her,he should have splashed her. I am glad that Sessh got there & stopped him before Inu did more & I'm glad Sessh heard her calling his name. I am curious if there was more Sessh wanted to say to her or ask her. Will there be more & if this is it ,are they mated now or does he still have to mark her or did he just want her body & the honor of being the 1st to rut her???? I'd like to believe he wanted her as his mate. I guess we can only wonder unless you decide to add to this. 

more more more...This was so juicy

wow i would pay a billion dollars for that story u did an amzing job please tellme if u will be making more storyies that have sesshomaru and kagome in it

sweet and cute

please updata