Although I don't want you to rush the story I would like to see how Miroku will save Sango -hopefully sooner than later. Poor Sango

Thanks for writing.

Honestly, I love this story. Plain and simple. At first I was skeptical, the first two chapters bothered me, and I was like. Uh huh. No way. But as the chapters went on, I was drawn in, and completely captivated. I understood everything she is doing--from her freak out of the mp3 player (one of her only things in her possession, something that is hers, of course she holds it of value) to the way she is reacting to Sesshomaru. His diligence is inspiring, and I think you're portraying her as a hurt woman trying to recover admirably. There is a magic to this story I cannot describe, the simplicity is amazing. You've done a very good job.

Better to end the chapter where you feel it should end -regardless of length- then to push yourself and stuff it with unfitting 'filler' is my opinion. It was a good little chapter. I loved how Sango was lamenting her own white knight... and then Miroku's name comes up. *grins* Though there's no guarantee of that classic pairing it subtlety gives us readers hope for her.

Thanks so much for writing!

soo freakinggg good more pleaseee!

omg i luv thiz chapter nd i luv the part wen sesshomaru askz kagome about sango's debt i cnt wait to c wat happens nxt keep up tha good job :)

interesting!

Finish this story,please!

yanno i love this fic, but OMG i really want to slap kagome. what's better being HIS mate, or being a whore. she needs to get her act together b/c seriously she's living a good life, much better then the one she had, and he cares for her. Yet she's being a tw@t about it. I really hope that someone puts it into perspective what a brat she's being. :[

HELP!

So I love that there is a mention of the Discover Mills mall in here. Although I'd figure Sesshomaru to be more of a Phipps Plaza type. :)

Muhahaha :) I love, love, love this story!!!

It is really well written!!!! You Rock! :D  

i lik it keep up the gud work

I love your narrative dear!  And a story very well told! Keep up the good work!

lol i like it but i waz too short lol cant wait to see watz nxt

crap! the last anonymous review with all the titles was mine(King takes Queen, The House Always Wins...etc)...accidently didn't add my name and it automatically put anonymous,,,<.< didn't know it;d do that<.<

you're right any update is appreciated.

please update as soon as you can!

totally wanna see where you go with this! we ever gonna get a chappie with Fluffy's POV to see his reasons? are we ever gonna meet his family(are his family alive)? what about Kagome's family? I mean her grandma and grandpa...I bet they wouldn't have sold her...if they were alive...bet that her parents might have gotten the boot from the miko community since Kaggy's so strong...I mean if they were gonna sell her they could have got more money from someone else I bet (for a strong miko)...Kagome is a strong miko right? is the Shikon in her or is she it's protector or is it even gonna be in the story?

wonder if Miroku's gonna be her cousin or something...Kagome would totally set him up with Sango then! or he could be a hentai Inu(related to Fluffy) then Kagome and Sango will be friends forever!

hmm ya want a new title? I got a few ideas. (based off of your initial title)

Sex is a Gamble (gambling game),

Take a Gambit,

All or Nothing,

King takes Queen,

Lord takes Lady,

Chance of a Lifetime,

Loose the bet Win Eternity,

Sold then Won,

Betrayed,

Slave turned Queen,

His Reasons are his Own,

Never Bet with Dogs,

Never Gamble with Dogs,

The House Always Wins,

His to Claim

hmmm....if I think of any more I'll let you know.

update as soon as you can sugah! I just LOVE this story.

wonder how long till Kagome gets pregnant...or figures out she is...because of course Lord Sesshomaru will do a thorough job claiming his mate

btw, does she (and Sango) know English or is she just talking in Japanese?

I definately wanna see what revenge Sesshomaru will take against her parents...of course he'll avenge her...well in my mind he will...

I'm not going to nag you to update this but it would be nice if you did , I patiently await the next installment of this lovely story :) he he you're a great author and this is an amazing story .

update soon!~♥