im really extremely disliking sesshoumaru's smart-arse stuck up attitude at the moment. i hope things start looking up for kagome soon, because we can clearly expect her to throw a tantrum when she cant access her powers.
please update.
Oh this doesn't seem well. First Sesshomaru, then Inuyasha. That poor girl has to live with that cold hearted jack a** as well! Man this chapter makes me want to punch someone.
Hi... i continue reading your story, so far is good....i hope she get pregnant for a lots of reasons, maibe son dont agreed with me but i tellyou is the best way to separated inuyasha from her. but again thats my fillins. please keep going as son posibble with the next chapter. bye.
when i got to the part 1, i was kind of distracted, and excited. Then the second part, i thought this is gonna be another threesome (i really don't mind that, in fact!). And up to the third chapter ... whoa, i suddenly have the urge to purchase a butchering knife (i never have one)... and soon the 4th chapter... i was ready to find a gun dealer (although it is very rare here!)... hopefully on the next chapter things will cool down a bit... or not? all in all, you are one hell of a very talented writer... by the way, could you please torture the inu lord 'A LOT' for taking the choices from her hand, as well Yasha for turning on her when she needed him the most? I'd really appreciated that...
This was such an amazing and well written chapter!!!! :D
But It was sooooooo sad and I feel sooooo bad for Kagome!! When Sesshomaru was telling her that Inuyasha wouldn't want her anymore, it made me tear up :(
Gosh! You are just such an amazing and talented writer!!! :) You rock something fierce!!! W00t :D
sorry for my mistake girl that was good please continue very soon please
Okay, I love the story so far, but I must admit- I skipped the rape scene (in my mind, there's just no going back from that, I've read it in a few stories and it just pisses me off completely, doesn't matter how well the guy tries to make up for it).
Update Soon Please! ^^
Poor Sesshomaru's beast, unrequited love sucks. Please update. ED
Love the story!
Damn, just when she finally gets Inuyasha. Isn't life screwy? Well it was a very informative chapter and I'm interested in seeing what will happen next.
WOW!!! I love this so far! Why did you leave such a huge cliff hanger!!!! I NEED more, more ,more! I have become your devoted reader for eternity. Please update quickly.
OMG!!!! I love it so far!!! Update soon!!!!
OMG, you left it THERE!!!! no, no, no! Nice plot--please continue sooooon!
please hurry and update its mean to leave it on such a large cliff hanger!
Yes, it's terrible what Sesshoumaru's beast did to her, but I'm glad Inuyasha was not her first. Because I still don't think Inuyasha would have been faithful to her since he still has moments of missing Kikyo. If they had mated, he would eventually have cheated on her and would always compare her to Kikyo. At least with Sesshoumaru they will start on even ground with their hatred and dislike toward each other and he won't be forever comparing her with a former love. I have a suspicion she's going to turn up pregnant, at least I hope so. She's now his mate and is everything he hates but his beast loves. Oh wow! This story promises to really be full of emotional moments and twists and turns as their hate slowly turns to love and all the turmoil in between. I hope you leave the pup a hanyou unlike some writers that make her have a full youkai due to her being a miko and him a powerful youkai. With his hatred for hanyous, it would only add to the emotion of the story for his heir to be one. I personally believe a hanyou born from a powerful youkai and a miko would be more powerful than an ordinary hanyou and also be able to control their blood. Anyway, you've got me all excited about all the possibilities in this story, so bring it on!
flames at you!! you defiler of innocence!! burn!! poor kags!! you made me cry! how an earth will kagome survive the abuse? whats going to happen when sesshoumaru realises what his beast did? WHATS GOING TO HAPPEN!!
im sorry for the flames but i feel i must for poor kagomes sake at least.
I would like you to contunie the story, i happen to really like it. Im intersested to see how things play out. Good luck to you.
oooooooooouuu i wonder whats wrong with kagome. youstoryis going great please continue to write more!!!!
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