Too bad this didnt have a chapter two. And punishment from Sesshomaru sounds oh so delicious right now.
Freaking awesome chapter!!! Loved the scene with the phoenix like alot. The whole in the sky was really good. And the kagome gloating Sesshomaru into te mating was a good move on kagomes part. Look forward to the next chap
Ceysna (Chapter 1) - Tue 12 Oct 2010
*fans self, red in the face* wow.... That was.... Wow.... XD HOT!!!!!!
hahaha I liked this! very nice
Bella (Chapter 1) - Sun 17 Jan 2010
That was certainly interesting, but really good :P
Even though this is parody the idea of this actual happening in some Sess/Kag out there isn't that far off. And it was hilarious!! Kags was a bitch on a mission and I personally would have went after Inu-chan with machete and an Amazon war cry. The clay tramp would have died that night along with my 'mate'. It was real raw and kind of brutal, but I really loved it!!
Definitely used a lot of cliches, but it was quite funny! I have a twisted sense of humor.
Mina (Chapter 1) - Sun 27 Dec 2009
great story hairann! ^-^ lots of steamy-ness it would be cool if you continued this oneshot hope to see more great works :)
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