Too funny! I am obsessively checking my inbox and dokuga for your updates to this story! My favourite part was the introduction of Hojo - his belief that she was possessed by a demon and his attempt to cure her was classic Hojo! :) Can't wait for the next update!
omg XDDD
I did not expect that twist. Well, you presented all the suitors in the most unfavorable light possible XDDD
this is getting good XDDD
Whew good lord and good luck to Kags. Looking forward to see how these two weeks go!
I like how you portray Kagome, here. Mercenary little thing, mwah ha ha! Add Sesshomaru, Shippo, Kouga and Hojo to the mix and I'll bet she'll find some way to survive this trial!
Oh I feel bad for her, at least Shippo's one she doesn't detest... LOL Hate to see what the two weeks will be like.... Will the chapters get longer by chance? Seems to short for my liking.... Yet still a great story.
Youkai toes??? Eeeeewwwwww. Oh, Hojo, will you never cease to amaze. If sucking on a youkai's toes cured ear aches and possession... Not gonna lie, I might just suck Sesshoumaru's toes LOL!
Firstly, I'm so happy you're back!
Secondly, I love this fic so much already. I can already feel the chaos that is about to come and my heart is ready lol.
Ultra snobby Sessh might be a top 3 fave Sess types and you write him beautifully.
Thank you for sharing this with us, I can't wait for the next chapter.
???? I love the diva-esque demeanor of Sesshoumaru, especially his obsession with his clothes. And you give a whole new meaning to the word arrogance with him in this story! I can't wait to see how these to stubborn characters come together!
Wow can't believe they would keep Kagome in the dark on what's about to happen... If anything Kagome would rather dig the jewel from her side and wish it gone than be subjected too the whims of male ego and lust.
Wait until she finds out. Shouldn't this information of the jewel had been with the coming of age talk. "Oh honey, you know our first talk of the birds and the bees; Well we left out one major thing you should know. You carry the Shikkon no Tama and the hated half demon Naraku is out to claim you and the jewel if you don't choose an elite........"
I know, I know it'll never happenn this way but can you imagine the look on Kagome's face if her mother told her that... She'd think it a joke.... Parents are stupid most times and Kagome's mother is one of them no matter how much she said she loved her... Boy, I like a kick-ass Kagome and the only innocent one would be Shippo. Can't wait to read more...
UPDATE SOON.
s_spina (Chapter 3) - Fri 30 Oct 2020
WOW, I never thought I would ever read a Sesshoumaru that could completely turn me off XD
run Kagome, run!!! I'm actually rooting for Kouga or Hojo in this one XDDDD
Wow, Sesshomaru is really full of himself, isn't he? I feel sorry for Kagome. This relationship is going to take a lot of work! On both sides. Hopefully Sesshomaru learns how to compromise. We now know that the shikon is involved as is Naraku so it will be interesting to see how you spin this.
Great update and I am looking forward to the next one!
(I don't do social medi. It's the devil! LOL! But seriously, not my thing. FanFiction is enough)
susie (Chapter 3) - Fri 30 Oct 2020
love me a petulant, elitist, good-son sesshoumaru who has no effing clue how bad he has it for kagome lol. great story, looking forward to more!
Deana (Chapter 2) - Tue 27 Oct 2020
Good story! I am so glad to see you are back.
Go Kagome! I love it when she has some sass and backbone ???? I can't wait to see what you have in store when she meets with the four prodigal sons.
I love everything about this so far! I can't wait to see what antics Kagome has in store!
Bahaha! Welcome back demonlordlover - you've been sorely missed. I look forward to watching Kagome tear the boys a new one!
*Chews popcorn with extra butter and salt*
I am loving this story so far! Its hilarious! I love this feisty Kagome.
Lol this chapter.
I love the peanut butter line!
Ohh kags fainting like that her poor head.
Okay, this is hilarious--please revive it!!
jojo661538 (Chapter 1) - Sat 09 Jan 2010
darn it why do all the good stories im finding have to end at the first or second chapter sigh well anyways keep up the great work i hope to read more soon ^_^
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