Absolutely Brilliant!!! My hat off to you! You wrote a beautiful flowing story that I spent the entire day reading and I couldn't pull myself away from the screen. It made me laugh, it made me cry, you drew all the emotions out of me that a story should draw out. I think the ending was positively beautiful considering its new take on an ending. It's a plot twist I had never seen before.
I spent all day reading this storie becuase it was so good. This was one of my favoirte stories until I read the ending. I canot believe this storie ended this way. It makes me want to cry. Really not happy right now.
Great story just hate the ending. I hate Inuyasha as a character most of the time so yeah, but still hate the ending. You still get high marks thought, if that last bit wasn't there it would be one of my favorite stories.
wow that was a great story i could not stop reading it even to do my homework
wait..so...the WHOLE thing was a dream for InuYasha...??? @.@ I'm so confused!
Oh wow, Poor Inuyasha!!!
I'm torn because it was so wonderfully written and executed, it's great. At the same time, I'm heartbroken for poor Inuyasha.
Bravo, it's a wonderful story :)
I read your story when it was first on Single Spark and I've always loved it. After reading it.. again I got curious about how other readers reacted to the twist at the ending and was surprised by some of the complaints. NEVER CHANGE IT! One of the best parts is leaving the story never certain if he is having a nightmare about his time pinned to the tree or if his happy ending is just some sick fantasy.
Ok... I was all good with the story right up till that ending.
IMO had you wanted a twist like that... you should have had it be Sess's dream since he's the one that was going on a lil mental meltdown after Rin's death.
Nicely done once again.
omfg i sooooooooooooooooooooooo did NOT see the ending coming!! this story was masterfully written!
i think ill remember this line forever! "Did you just put baby juice on me?" lol idt there has ever been a better sentence!!!
this is such an amazing story i love the ending you are a GREAT writer!
Absolutely brilliant. Poignant and touching in all its horrifying beauty. I laughed, I cried-- I could see the whole story unfold and bloom in my mind as I read. And in the end the blossom wilted, as they all must. Or did it?
Regardless, I have to say, you must have been feeling rather bitter and depressed when you wrote that last chapter..
Wishing you the best,
Az.
I love it!! You did a great job with depicting all the characters!! ^^ The ending was awesomeeeee!!! <3
I just finished reading your fic and I read tight through it today. I'm lucky enough to discover this fic; after searching and reading what is currently being posted, I thought my Sess/Kag fanfic obsession was over. It's back now because of you.
..Dude, that's a messed up ending.
well damn...
a lot of sexual tensiion and frustratiion there...
damn...
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