Hello,
I absolutely love it when writer decide to give Naraku an actual personality!!! You did a very good job so far, because while you show another side of him (the loving and caring one) he is in no way ooc. His handling of the issue with Kagome's mother proves this. So he is still the cruel and always plooting person we know him to be, but it's NOT his only side. Very well done!!!
Little Kagome is just adorable! She is really smert for her age, and I cannot even start to understand, how her own mother could treat her that way! :( Anyway Kagome has a lot of papas and mommas out there :D I'm curious to see, how Kagome will handle all the males who see her as a daughter, they are sure to get jealous about each other - but Kagome is a smart one, she will figure it out ;)
I would really like it, if you could explain in a chapter, how Naraku became to be a part of the pack. I think this is very interesting!
I absolutely support your decision to focus at the beginning on Kagome's childhood. Don't rush things unnecessary just to come to the Sess/Kag part!!! I find the relationship they both have really interesting, and don't feel the need to finally see some romantic development with Kagome as a grown up!!!
I would like to read more about the actual project "Chrystal Hearts" other than it being stolen, there hasn't been much input about it. And with Naraku being the one to develop it, I cannot think of whom this "master" could be ... Let's see where you will be going with this story!
I'm looking forward to your next update!
????????????????????????????????????I was lonely waiting on new chapter. This is good they getting alone can’t wait to see what happen. I really enjOyed readin this new chapter, thoght It was goin to end badly but it didn’. From dory’s “just keep swimming“.Anyway I hate trying to pay for words too,????????. I know some school give word free to students for a year. Thanks for a new chapter, as I start from the beginnig again
