Awsome story. Keep it up!!!
Oh muse of Complexity please wake up! The story is so awesome! I must needs more!
Saphireanime (Chapter 3) - Thu 21 Jul 2011
Rainfire of Riverclan (Chapter 3) - Fri 28 May 2010
this is a realy good story i hope you will update soon
Aura (Chapter 2) - Tue 19 Jan 2010
Hmm, well, I'm not into the gender bending stuff. Good opening but I think I'll bow out here.
Aura (Chapter 1) - Tue 19 Jan 2010
I like the rhyme curse, it seems so innocent and singsongy for all the pain. Evil but fun, I like evil torment for characters....long as it doesn't get too repretative. I greatly enjoyed the opening of this though!
Aww come on I hate cliff-hangers!!!!!!!!!!!! What the bloody hell is that bracelet I want to know so bad. Its getting to damn interesting!!!!!!!!!!!
Nice job by the way Im lovin ur style of writing its so fluent.
Wow what an intersting story I found a pic about it and decided to read it. Its so entertaining. It keeps my attention. Im getting the feeling that sesshomaru is putting the pieces together. Well Im off to read the next chapter.
That was excellent! Hah! Great fiction dude. I really like it (the fight scene was better than most that I've read so yep) and I love the idea of how you made Kagome turn into a different gender/race; it works really well with your writing style.
Ah cliffhangers... they keep me wanting to read more :P So update As soon as you can! ^^
Kiri (Chapter 3) - Fri 08 Jan 2010
I am enjoying this story quite a bit more than I expected - I greatly look forward to reading more and have it bookmarked. Looking forward to your next chapter!
chevonne (Chapter 3) - Thu 07 Jan 2010
I dont think that i've ever read a story like tis one.
I am looking forward to the next chapter.
Dani (Chapter 3) - Thu 07 Jan 2010
Awesome! Can't wait to see what comes next. I don't see any mistakes that make me cringe and not want to read your story anymore. In fact, unlike some un-beta'd stories, I can't even remember what mistakes I may have seen. Woo-hoo!
Yay! An upate! So soon too. ^_^
Poor Kagome. I don't hink I could do the hunting either. *_* maybe fish.... but nothing else. So now she might have found someone who knows something. Or is in a bigger mess. Can't wait to see what happens.
Are you going to write more? I'd like to read more please! Thank you!
~SesshysTrueMate1
AH! Nice twist! I can't wait to read more. Gah how she going to get out of this one....and when she changes back...briefly...?
So basically she in a body of someone else....who might be dead, or killed there family....? It's ok to not respond, either way I'll find out as I read. :P
Lexi (Chapter 2) - Mon 04 Jan 2010
Hey there! I love this story already, and I can't believe I didn't see it sooner! You've done a great job with the explanations and the visuals are absolutely amazing! Bravo! I can't wait to see how Kagome deals with the curse! Oh and I know of someone who might be willing to beta for you, so let me know if you still need one!
Interesting story, I like the picture you drew so I thought I'd read your story.
It's actually really well written (yay :D) Please update as so as possible! ^^ -checks it for favorite story-
I'm not totally sure what happened t her, but i can't watit to find out. Good start, can't wait to read more.
I hope you plan on translating the meaning of the curse because I understood very little of it. It mainly left me confused. I just hope the curse is not a deep, dark, bad one but something to grant her her wish even if it is in a round-about way.
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