this is really great! -not the 'I gather souls to make an army' but what is happening with sess&kag-. :D
I can wait to see what will happen!
is there some particular vilains that had been taken from the underworld that we will see again or not?
I'm really curious to know who is the 'bad guy'! ^^
please, update soon again!
Mimiru (Chapter 12) - Wed 06 Jan 2010
Man I'm like, wiggling in my seat in anticipation I cant wait until the next update or updates :3!
I love this story and the face that you update so quickly it makes me happy when i return to the dokuga homepage an see a new update. I like the romance that is beginning and i do not think it is an unlikely romance because kagome is death and sesshoumaru is the exception to death. ^_^
I really like your story, can't wait to read more.
That would hurt my heart too to see my best friend so full of anger and pain directed at me. Love the way she messed with Inu though, that was hilarious!
Althea (Chapter 10) - Tue 05 Jan 2010
So your going to have Sess do an evocation of death. An invocation is taking a spirt inside ones body, where as an evocation calls a spirt to aid them. I dont think you want Kagome in Sess's body, well may be Sess in Kagome (wink wink). That type of ritual is going to be rather hard to find unless you know a witch, but even then something like that most would not try to do.
fallen (Chapter 1) - Tue 05 Jan 2010
Ok its official I am in LOVE with this story! I started reading and got to chapter 9 I was bummed I would have to wait for an update, but when I went back to Dokuga's homepage you already had up chapter 10!! I was practically giddy! Keep up the great and wonderful work, I look foward to your next chapter!
Althea (Chapter 9) - Tue 05 Jan 2010
Oh my gosh, I just thought of something. Kagome is seeing the soul's being reincarnated, correct. Umm I kind of think it she will be stuck with the job for ever. Because if her friends are being reincarnated they are still in the mortal world. Yikes!!! and she did this of her own free will. Being bound by her love of friends and family, some one to protect. Oh wow.... Hey wait is that what Inuyasha is going to tell Sess? That love of those you are willing to die for to protect, is what death is bound by? Ok enough of silly questions on my part, I must wait for the authors update (sitting on hands to keep them away from keyboard and asking more questions or thoughts)
LOVE IT!! Please more chapters..HURRY!!
Althea (Chapter 9) - Tue 05 Jan 2010
Wow a soul killer, was wondering if maybe it was another void demon like Kanna? But from what your describing it sound like an Egyptian mythology, Ammit (also spelt Ammut and Ahemait, meaning Devourer or Bone Eater) was a female demon with a body that was part lion, hippopotamus and crocodile. A funerary deity, her titles included “Devourer of the Dead,” “Eater of Hearts,” and “Great of Death.” Ok I do read too much.
I wonder what Inuyasha will say about how Death is bound.
hi...
good job so far...im wonering what will happen when next its getting really good...
good job and update soon...
Dani (Chapter 9) - Tue 05 Jan 2010
Whew! You're doing fast work! This is one of the best that I have read and I have read some unique stories. Wherever your inspiration comes from I hope the flow keeps coming. Me loves quick updates and won't hate you even if they are slow. Ciao!
Althea (Chapter 7) - Tue 05 Jan 2010
AWWW thank you, but as I said the poem is not mine....I found it and when you started this story it reminded me of it and I thought you would like it also. I am glad to help, even if it is just a little poem.
Wow, my computer crashes and you post more.... Good thing I have my trusty laptop to read from.
Oh, come on! I'm dying to know what Inuyasha is going to say that's the 'key'! Another great chapter! :)
That is a cool cliffie! I can't wait to see what or who is stealing souls and why. This is going to be great!
Althea (Chapter 6) - Tue 05 Jan 2010
I go to sleep for a bit and 2 new chapters, woot. You had Kagome send Kohoku to Sess before a war... Hmmm, wonder where that is going to go. Also your making Kagome more like the Grim Reaper, the harvester of souls, very interesting. The way your making Kagome reminds me of a poem I once read by Denise Paduano.
The Reaper calls come to me She's fogged with pain, it's difficult to see
She senses his presence in the chilly room Knowing what he wants, she doesn't have to assume
He calls her softly with pity on his breath She knows he's come to enfold her in death
A tear falls down her now pale cheek All senses failing, she feels so weak
For so long she thought she was going insane She's prayed for him to come and relieve the pain
She looks at her family one and all While the reaper waits at the end of the hall
They see her slipping and their tears start falling At the same time the reaper is calling
She looks to her savior and nods her head Feeling sudden hope, there is no fear or dread
He takes her frail hands and looks into her eyes It's time to go. Have you said your goodbyes?
Yes I have, my savior my friend I am ready now and know my life's at it's end
As his arms engulfed her, she felt life shifting She signed with relief as the pain began lifting
He said let us go home. It's time to move on A tear rolled down her cheek and then she was gone.
"Parting is such sweet sorrow". Sweet sorrow. Nice writing!
Althea (Chapter 4) - Tue 05 Jan 2010
I waited all day looking for an update on this, I was about to go to bed when I found it. Oh wow, Sess got a promise from Death. Wonder how painful Kagome can make Sess's death if he fails to keep Rin alive? So is Sess going to find the info in the scrolls? I would think that there would be no information on it, because she is a new creature and not an imp of the underworld. Oh well I will have to see what the wonderful and talented author comes up with. (wonders if flattery will get another chapter or two written soon)
Ruby (Chapter 3) - Mon 04 Jan 2010
I really enjoy this story so far. Could I perhaps ask you to continue writing it? I know you're busy, but I'm in love with your portrayl of Kagome's character.
hi,
good story. it is sad but it is something Kagome has to do...i did get sad in this chapter...good job and update soon...
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