wow this is a really great story i absolutely love it keep up the great work i hope you update soon ^_^
I hate that you let Sesshoumaru's arm get cut off. I hated that part of the anime. Please give it back to him soon.
I like the way you're portraying Kikyou. I get tired of her always being evil.
pixie (Chapter 9) - Mon 15 Mar 2010
this is hilarios and many of the things sesshomaru did my sister would so do
More, please.
This is the perfect time for me to picture Sesshou inserting foot into mouth scene... I can certainly understand Kagome's anger and wonder how long it'll take for her to cool off. And I look forward to reading about the interesting twist you've put on the whole Naraku origins thing. Keep up the good work and update soon :P
Diane (Chapter 11) - Mon 01 Feb 2010
I like it overall, had some problems understanding here & there because the wording was off though. Umm slight word choice error here; Kagome really had no sense of self perseverance. Should be preservation instead of perseverance.
you just left it there?! D: i nearly cried, i didn't want it to end there its like teasing me saying "HA! You can't read me anymoreee" FFFFF update quickly as possible. i enjoy reading the story and i love the way the plot is heading. is Naraku gonna be showing up in the storyy?
So Kagome being mischievous is a family thing since her brothers are such a handful themselves? Then she definitely is a Higurashi. And I can't believe how childish Kagome can be when she's put together with Inuyasha. I can't wait for Kagome to meet her brothers... *evil grin* Just think of all the trouble they could cause when the Higurashis are reunited. Keep up the good work and update soon :P
nightingale (Chapter 10) - Fri 29 Jan 2010
while with the element thoery, it depends on what myths you use. some have four and some have five or six.
lhazell (Chapter 1) - Fri 29 Jan 2010
It was a great chapter! =) Please update soon! =D
I think that you made this story so much more interesting with your plot twist. And I love how enthusiastic you made Inuyasha when he was eating Ramen. I look forward to Kagome meeting her brothers. Keep up the good work and update soon :P
REDWOLF (Chapter 8) - Sat 23 Jan 2010
This is such a fun story! It's fun to read,relaxing.
stars (Chapter 7) - Tue 19 Jan 2010
please updata
Sokai (Chapter 7) - Sat 16 Jan 2010
I like this side a Kagome. It will be an interesting trip with Sesshy. Update soon!!!!
LOL...I love this chapter. <sighing> Goodness, do I love Sesshoumaru..especially in this story. He is just..so..so..goodness there are just not enough adjective to describe how amazing I think he is. Please continue onward..dear writer. I am so loving this story. I cannot wait to read the next chapters. Hurry..pleaseee!!!
Dani (Chapter 6) - Mon 11 Jan 2010
"Who the hell are you, James Bond?!" Hilarious-I love it! Haha, can't wait to see what hilarity ensues. More please!
So is Kagome going to smack Sesshou? I would so smack a perv who peeked at me but then again I'd love an excuse to smack him *wink*. I can't wait to see where this leads. I wonder what Inuyasha's mom will say when she seems them. Also, did Kagome learn to use her miko powers? Keep up the good work and update soon :P
stars (Chapter 5) - Fri 08 Jan 2010
please updata
This is definitely an interesting twist to the whole story. I wonder what Kagome's reaction will be when she learns that her mom and grandfather aren't looney-bins. I look forward to see what you have in store for Kagome. Keep up the good work and update soon :P
Dani (Chapter 5) - Thu 07 Jan 2010
*Shaking my head* Well, of course Sess would try a test to see if he could kill his intended. I'm wondering why he didn't smell himself on her. Or what was is the Inuyasha said something about his scent on Kags. Well, n-t-ways, update soon. I can't wait to see how Kagome handles someone who tried to poison her. Update soon please!
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