I like the story but it is really annoying that the only description you use is 'umber' when referring to Kagome's eyes when it could simply be wrote as her eyes i.e. "she rolled her umber eyes" could have just been "she rolled her eyes".

Other than that I think it's a good story with a lot of potential.

Fantastic.

Is Kagome really seeing these dead people because she had been dead herself?

Awesome as usual.  I can't wait for the next update!  :)

I take it the Naraku thing is really happening? YAY is all I can say, I have been toying with that idea for so long now, it would be great for someone to actually write it.

I have to say this chapter was superb. The emotions rolling through Sesshomaru, and they way you tell it, is just wonderful. I got the feeling of a sort of softness towards the end. Kudos on another great chapter.

I really like this chapter. It was intersting to read from his point of view. I had always been wondering what he was thinking.

And this is why I love your works. You have the great ablity to draw the reader in and hold them rather breathlessly. This is of no exception. It is a gem in the making, and I sincerely look forward to more.

Wel that was messed. ;_; Poor kagome. i like your plot and I'm curious to see what happens.

No way! Bad Sesshoumaru! He's going to use Tenseiga .... right???

O.O!!!!I REFUSE to believe Kagome is dead! Theres just NO WAY!

 it was a really mean chapter... it was so short! :(

please, please, update as soon as possible! I can't wait to see what will happen next and what sesshomaru will do!

Jaken doesn't have to be so mean! she's trying! can't wait to read more, please and thankyou!

I have really been enjoying this story. Sorry it took me so many chapters to review. It's a very interesting concept and each chapter keeps me intrigued as to what will happen next. Very well-written and I like the character portrayals. Excellent work and I can't wait to read what happens next!

I honestly can't Wait to read more, this is fantastic, please and thankyou.

Her reasons for not training are stupid, childish, and a lame excuse.  She fails to realize that she constantly puts her pack mates in danger by them always having to come to her aid.  Sure, she's making a brave stand now, but it would be a lot easier if she was fully trained.  That could be the reason she can't release Sesshoumaru.  The arrow was from a fully trained, strong miko which Kagome isn't.  Her reiki isn't strong enough to overcome the reiki of the other miko.  Of course, I could be wrong and you have a completely different reason. 

Omg, poor Kags! Poor Sesshy! but I know in the end it will all work out, it usually does. Thankyou for the greatwork, i can't wait to read more.

Wow, I like this story and its idea. I'm wondering how she would get the arrow out. I had this absurd notion that she might accidentally lose conscious and her lips might accidentally hit his (she wouldn't remember when she came to) and he would suddenly be free the next time she tries and pulls it out. Haha, but that's just me. It would be interesting to see the next chapter.

Your story is well written, with very few spelling errors here and there. I hope you update soon. :D

~SxT

Pls update soon! Great story, great puzzle. How will she get the arrow neutralized? It seems she needs to change the heart/soul of the one who put it there to remove it.