Reviews for Primero by JeniNeji

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Loveyaa (Chapter 36) - Mon 20 Feb 2012

Im looking forward to the end of this battle and to see where that leaves everything. It seems like a lot of progress has been made and Im wondering if Meta is going to stay out on her own. I can't wait to see what happens next :)


naqaashi (Chapter 36) - Fri 27 Jan 2012

All I can say is: D'awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! 

So much adoration!

Update soon, please? And don't kill Meta, please please? 


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 36) - Fri 27 Jan 2012

@_@ MORE!!!!


Cent (Chapter 35) - Mon 16 Jan 2012

awwwww I love the story I hope more chapters are coming soon!


Trelweny Rosephoenixwolf (Chapter 35) - Sat 14 Jan 2012

Booyaka! He asked her!

Thanks for writing!


Loveyaa (Chapter 35) - Fri 13 Jan 2012

This was a quite enjoyable chapter. A lot of things happened and emotions were running high. I like that you have Kagome and Meta seperate and yet they still are connected (wonder if they will join up again). Everything is building up and I can't wait to see where it all leads to and what a "real" mating actually entails. I can't wait to see what happens next :)


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 35) - Fri 13 Jan 2012

if you could only see my face i'm so totally cheezing at the moment i mean all wide and scary grin Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee♥


yume (Chapter 35) - Thu 12 Jan 2012

OMG!!!!!! Sesshoumaru is So sweet *-*  i LOVE HIM MORE THAN EVER!!!!!  update soon :D


Kitten (Chapter 35) - Thu 12 Jan 2012

awesome story.


MissKatt (Chapter 35) - Thu 12 Jan 2012

You are quite welcome!!

However...

YOU YELL AT ME FOR LEAVING MY FIC AT A CLIFFY!?!?

Hypocrit....

XD

Love you! Hurry and write the next chapter :3

-MissK


naqaashi (Chapter 35) - Thu 12 Jan 2012

Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

::huggles you breathless:: AT LAST! ::dances while giggling like a madwoman::


Trelweny Rosephoenixwolf (Chapter 34) - Sun 01 Jan 2012

Now he just has to tell KAGOME that he wants her. Before she does something foolish like letting him go for 'his sake' in her not-knowing.

Thanks for writing!


Diane (Chapter 12) - Fri 30 Dec 2011

Well it's a really good story plot-wise, but you have odd errors all over the place, like you seem to have in & on confused, every time you use on it should be in & the few times you've used in it should be on. Also in this chapter phantom should be fathom. You seem to have tense problems too, like putting ing on things that should have ed instead, somewhere in this you have attacking you & it should be attacked you, stuff like that.


Loveyaa (Chapter 34) - Thu 29 Dec 2011

Wow...a lot has happened. I like the connection that seems to have flourished and solidified between Kagome, Sesshoumaru, and Meta. I think it is interesting that a new beast is born inside a demon when the old one is passed on and they have different personalities. I wonder how Sesshoumaru's new revelation will effect the battle they are about to enter (I wonder if he will as hurt as he is). I also hope that the group somehow ends up back together or at least meeting back up. I can't wait to see what happens and if this will be the end of naraku :)


REDWOLF (Chapter 34) - Tue 27 Dec 2011

WOW....WOW!!!!


Selazul (Chapter 34) - Tue 27 Dec 2011

It was perfect :)


Lillian (Chapter 34) - Tue 27 Dec 2011

EEE Meta's manifested! Egads! What will happen next? Will Meta return to Sesshomaru? Oooh the suspense!


naqaashi (Chapter 34) - Tue 27 Dec 2011

O.o.o.o.o WHY did Yuza try to kill Sess? Why why WHY? @_@ Don't tell me i's because she wants the West for herself? @_@ Gahhh. >.<


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 34) - Tue 27 Dec 2011

*wails in love and joy and omg i have to wait for more*flails wildly* MORE!!!


yume (Chapter 34) - Mon 26 Dec 2011

OH MY GOD!! i loved the chapter >.< <3  the way sesshoumaru felt enamored >.<......... merry christmas


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