Well, I have enjoyed your work thus far, but a chapter with an anime flashback taking up most of the space was a bit disappointing. I'm probably not the only one who skims chapters like this because reading a scene that has been recreated on this site so many times is boring. Everyone knows about how Kagome pulled out Tetsusaiga, and most people don't like to be reminded by reading a chapter that is almost a script of that episode. It's been so long since you've really visited the plot with more than a paragraph that I've had to go back and read Chapter 22 again. I really enjoy reading this story, though, so please don't take this as a flame or anything. I just want to say that you should think about moving on without including the flashbacks, or at the very least put it in a more concise form without everything being word for word. Other than that, this story is good and has a good flow and storyline. I wouldn't be waiting impatiently for each installment if I didn't like it overall! 

-A_P

I really....really hope that Sesshoumaru founds out the truth and kills Inuyasha so he and Kagome can live happily ever after! I love this story so much!

The pathos! WOW.  I sure hope Inuyasha ends up in little bits all over the Western Lands for stealing Kagome and marking her.

Save Sess!

In the name of everything holy and unholy, my dear sweet author, let me bow to your onmipotent brilliance.

That being said, I wish to convey the absolute level of intense appreciation I have for this work.  I do not know what first sparked my interest, but I have never been more glad to have begun reading and continued reading a fanfiction for I don't even know how many hours.  Your use of coy wit and humor have me laughing outright.  The overall romantic theme of unrequitted love, stolen love, unsolved need for two soul mates to be together but now...seem so lost.  My heart aches with a passion to know what happens next.  (My, you've made a sentimental fool out of me.)

Please update when you can and enjoy your life as a newly married woman.

Your ever grateful fan,

inu :D (IR)

MRS Kazenokoi, you still rockin' with these new chapters!  Angst galore and ever so bittersweet!  Love it!

What scene should be drawn out, if ever?  Hmmm, I personally like one that has the best and worst of times on paper, like Sesshou sitting alone with no hope to look forwward to as he recalls the happiest moments he ever had with Kagome.  Quite the contrast and very bittersweet, just like the story!

It seems that you're movin' on to Kagome now...can't wait to read up on that!  Good work, Kaze...and congrats again on being a MRS!

wow... ok so at this point.. can the mating bond be broken without killing InuYasha? Would Kagome prevent the killing or hope that InuYasha gets his just desserts. I hope she doesnt give into InuYasha as for Sesshomaru... he need to stop wallowing and think he is going to pay back his brother for his pain and rescue her!

Congrats on your wedding!  "We married women must stick together."  ;P

You have painted Sess and Kagome so very broken.  It's heat wrenching.  I love it!  I really hope this has a happy ending.  Of course, I think real life needs to have a happy ending too.  I rarely have wanted to see Inuyasha get the crap beat out of him, but the way you have Sess and Kagome suffering after what he's done... well, I could see death would be too easy.

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Who would have thought a bout of the flu would get me reading this in one sitting? I'm laughing, then I'm crying, then I'm going "awwww" and then my throat is clutching. I've seen how people are in a terminal illness, and it's so painful watching Sesshoumaru's hopes being crushed so utterly. I honestly can't guess at how this will end. You keep winding us tighter and tighter, and I am enjoying every minute.  CONGRATS on getting married! :) I look forward to more of this in the future, and when I have time to digest what all comes next I'll definitely write another review. This fic is full of WIN.

Poor Sesshoumaru...  He's been through a lot...  Hopefully, the misunderstandings between Sesshoumaru and Kagome are cleared up soon.  I would be really happy then.  :D  Well, I'm happy that you updated though.  :)  Well, keep up the great work!  Can't wait until the next one!

--nao-chan

Ooooh sniff, sniff. This chapter actually almost made me cry, you just wrote it so damn good. I don´t know how many times have I already said the awesome author you are but I think one more won´t hurt. You´re an awesome writer. Oh, btw, congratulations for your wedding and your new life. ;)

First before anything....Congratulations!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  I hope your wedding was everything you dreamed about!!! 

Now onto business....I loved this chapter alot!  It was nice to see how Sesshoumaru realized he had feelings for Kagome and I hope he holds true to that and goes after her! Inuyasha has a lot to answer for and Sessh needs a chance to explain himself!  Oohh I can't wait for more!!!!!

Welcome back!!!  Best wishes as always!

First off, welcome back and Congratulations once again!  So good of you to think of your readers so soon after your return :)

This was a great chapter.  It's good to see the background of the characters developing feelings.  It will be interesting to see the other side.

Just a question:  if InuYasha has already marked Kagome, how is this going to end happily for Sesshoumaru?  Or is it?

Keep up the great work.

And I agree with your noms as well - all wonderful Authors.

congratz on your wedding. me i am a 30 year vet of the game.  the first year is not so bad  for us it was the year nine for some reason oh well. congratz again. now stop dragging your writing feet and get to the part where Sess goes to get Kags and beating the holy hell out of Inuyasha later dear :)

Poor Kagome... poor Sesshoumaru...  Frickin' Inuyasha...  >_>  Who knew he could be so stupid?  Well, hopefully, all the misunderstandings will be cleared up soon...  :3  Well, keep up the great work!  Can't wait until the next one!

--nao-chan

Noooo! :'( Stupid baka hanyou! >:( Please update soon!

first this is a great story and i love it.  but u really have to STOP with the evil cliff hangers. i would love u to enjoy your wedding and not have nasty evil thoughts from your fans interferring with your wonder day. :)  now i really want Inuyasha to die, first raping , then marks without permission, and then threats to hit her,   he really must die.  Update really soon PLEASE.

Hey, thanks for your words but I thank you so much more, because in my always stressed and busy life, this fanfic actually takes my mind somewhere else, and, as I said before I really like that sessh is not all powerful and is vulnerable and feels doubt and fear like everyone else. Let me tell you that your story is very refreshing to read and I hope you carried it to the end (a happy end) ;)

Too awesome for words, too DAMN awesome!  So wonderful and so tragic...brilliant!  Boy I was glad that some small satisfaction can be had with Kagome b-smacking the tar out of InuYasha, not that it lasted.  Ah well, what next?  Oh yes...YOUR wedding!  If you can't put out new material before then, see you when you return!  May your wedding/honeymoon be joyous and worth remembering for always!