OMG I love this! Kagome seems so cool and I love how Sesshomaru isn't a prick in it! Aw Rin and Kohaku are so cute together, I'm happy they might get together in this story!
I can't wait for you to update!
What a cute story, I really enjoy reading it. I can't wait to read what happens next and what references will be made. Keep up the good work!
I think a lot of Tammy Fae Baker's eyelash thing was false eyelashes. Okay, I think false eyelashes served as a foundation for the mascara. I would be more interested in the glue used as an adhesive for the false eyelashes. How do they test that on lab animals? Little rats, with little false eyelashes?
I love pop-culture fanfics! And this one is very breezy, and fun. What the heck are Brigadoon pajamas, anyway?
Sophie (Chapter 5) - Sat 20 Feb 2010
She throw fries at him! That's my girl! I love it! Keep going please!!!
krazy4fluffy (Chapter 4) - Tue 16 Feb 2010
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! This is so much fun !! n_n
krazy4fluffy (Chapter 3) - Tue 16 Feb 2010
^^ awesomeness... U got me hooked! Totally!!!
krazy4fluffy (Chapter 2) - Tue 16 Feb 2010
Sounds like a date to me too 0=P
Krazy4fluffy (Chapter 1) - Tue 16 Feb 2010
I love this!! Hahaha it's ecstastic !!! It's so full of life from Kag's part that I feel like jumping! lol...
n_n
Sophie (Chapter 4) - Tue 16 Feb 2010
That story is just getting better and better. It's smart, sweet and funny! And I decided I'm addicted to it, so please add new chapter soon ;)
kazenokoi (Chapter 4) - Tue 16 Feb 2010
Sorry, I forgot to sign in- just wanted to say I love this fic, it's fresh and fun!
Raven88 (Chapter 4) - Tue 16 Feb 2010
OMG I cannot believe you went there, that ch. 4 was awsome!!!!
I am really loving this story and the jokes with it's got character and it shows!
Good Job!
gina (Chapter 4) - Mon 15 Feb 2010
you know the more i read your great story, the more i love it. truly! it is just great! thanks for sharing, can't wait to read more.
Tiffany (Chapter 4) - Mon 15 Feb 2010
Hey,
Your story is progressing nicely. However, you have a few spelling mistakes such as disserve= deserve and defiantly= definitely. That's all. I look forward to the next chapter. Keep up the good work. :)
Tiff
this chapter was hilarious i was confused when kagome was assuming that sesshomaru was making up for "something" but then i caught on and i was dying in my seat it was so funny lolz but please put chapter 5 up soon i was so engrossed in this chapter i didnt even realize it was doine til i got to the end sheesh
The delight of this story is the intelligence of it. I love the way you are revealing the characters to us. Showing them to be very real people, with flaws and foolishness. And it is challenging to the reader to keep up with all of your references. That just adds to the fun! But tell me, you've never nibbled on an evergreen because Gibbons said you could?
I think these little changes are from both Chapters 3 and 4, and I think they occur because you're writing so fast.
“I am very proud of you Rin. I’ll [defiantly] definately be there.”
[Be] He blanched. “Please don’t.”
Kagome was [defiantly] definately the woman.
I feel as if I [disserve] deserve to get myself a nice looking car.
And just what's wrong with Ninbur? Some of my best friends might be named Ninbur, or Waynock, or Zookbur... Yeah, well... I don't know anyone named Garwocket, but it does have a rather hobbity tone to it. All that being said, Sunshine, this is a wonderful story. I love all the references (I thought I was the only one who remembered the 5th Dimension) and I love Kagome. She is a bright, happy bundle of light. I hope you can keep this going. It's very good!
Loving this fic!
gina (Chapter 3) - Fri 12 Feb 2010
please more!! i love this story! i need more please. =)
gina (Chapter 1) - Fri 12 Feb 2010
i love your story! kagome is so funny!!! i love gnomes!!! =)
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