Ack. You're evil for cutting the story off before the ball scene. I adore Pride and Prejudice (if you haven't seen the BBC mini series, I highly reccomend it. It has Colin Firth as Darcy *dreamy sigh*). I like your adaptation and how you used the different characters in a way that suits the Austen characters ^_^ I hope you keep writing it. It's too much fun to let it end there. Keep up the good work!
I really like this so far, it is well written and the detail is great! I think you have done a wonderful job so far. You should update soon, I am really wanting to read more :D Keep up the great work!
When you say 'with some slight changes', does that mean you plan to leave the majority of the demons as demons? I know you made Ayame a human, but to think of Sesshoumaru as a human? That just seems to take away from his personality. It's impossible to even picture him as a human. I am a fan of the original 'Pride and Prejudice' and know that you have your work cut out for you. Irregardless of your decision, I wish you good luck and good writing.