please update soon please

next chapter please

i love this story very much it is one of my favourites i hope you will not stop updating, i understand that maybe at this time u may writer's block or maybe you are busy with other things. i am just  writing to tell you to keep up the good work

 Chapter 12

this is a good story it is  very drawing.

Why make inuyasha out to to the bad guy.

it makes me sad enough hate him for being what he is allready.

this is a great story keep up the great work

I love your story and can't wait to read more. In the last chapter for a few dialogues you changed Kagome's name to Kiyone. Was that just a typo or did it mean something else?

....Kiyone?  You used that name twice instead of Kagome. XD

Strangely enough, the name Kiyone keeps appearing in the lemon, which to some extent, takes the fun out of reading it. Is Kiyone another character in the story, or is there some mix-up with other characters from other manga/anime? Like perhaps, Kiyone Kotetsu from Bleach or something. But anyway other than that slip up, everything else was great! Good job! :) I am enjoying it.

Great chapter, but I'm confused. You dropped the name "Kiyone" a couple times in the last chapter. Was that a slip up, or was there another character by the name Kiyone in your series? 

Keep updating!

HAWT!  Did I mention that this is HOT!  must read MOAR!

Excellent!  This is a very good story, well-written and engaging.  I am enjoying it soooo much!  I hope you make it a long one, I don't want it to end!

Oh, that was a great chapter!  So much tension!  Thanks for updating so quickly.  Quick, hit me again!!!!!

That was awesome!  This story is just sooo good!  Now I'm hooked though, and desperate for your next update.  I hope you can write more soon!

I find it unbelievable that Lawyer Sesshy would wear white socks with a suit!  I'm really enjoying this story, I am always on the lookout for stories where Sesshomaru is a business professional, and this is a very good one!  You have excellent writing skills, and the story is very flun and entertaining.  Keep up the great work!  Please, write a lot!

Zangetsu......Do we have a Bleach fan as well??? Isn't that the name of Ichigo's sword....

Quite the interesting read so far.

Tilayha

Inuyasha is such a @$$, he deserves neverything sesshoumaru gives him. Update soon

wow, thats all I can say, wow

This is most definitely one of the most refreshing and greatest reads i've had in a long while. You are a great writter and I would absolutely love reading more of your work. I love reading long long long chapter stories, so long as they have good plots. I hope you will contemplate on attempting that. I love your ideas and style. Keep writing!

Great update! I love Sesshoumaru's interaction with his mother - both of them are just so cool, and you've kept her in excellent characterization as we've seen from Inuyasha: The Final Act. Detached, aloof, wickedly humorous yet ultimately caring like how a mother should be...that's really good characterization you have there. On another note, poor Kagome must be drained from all that...workout. LOL. Hope to see the relationship develop more from now! :) You're doing so well!

Hi -

I hardly ever comment (actually, this would make it my first review, here in Dokuga), but after reading your story in one sitting, I knew I won't be logging off without saying something. This was a truly, truly, awesome read - the flow was great, the passion and fire were all but snapping from the screen, and the lemon was tastefully done. 

What can I say? I love it. Keep up the good work, and I hope you update soon. :)