I love it, so cute and funny, but you need to get a better beta, look at what all she missed!
She was freaking out, where else could it have gone [too] to?!
the noise into the forest and then into [a] another clearing.
There she saw her skeleton, with the exception of the legs,
*head slap* I did NOT miss all of this! I should have checked it over one more time!
Jupe (Chapter 1) - Sat 13 Feb 2010
Pffffft! This was perfect. You're a doll, a peach, and a friend. Thanks for brightening my day, hon. <333
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