The first two chapters left me a bit confused, I liked reading this story and loved the last chapter, I do wish for more sweetness but that might be just me, anyway you did great!
TKE (Chapter 9) - Fri 31 Aug 2012
I absolutely loved this, it was so beautiful!!!
I think the last chapter was my favorite! So very sweet. I would have loved to see that one developed into a full story.
-Paperwing
Lexie (Chapter 8) - Mon 01 Nov 2010
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SO CUTE!! i thank you for continuing Demon Park and I hope that you plan to keep continuing it - I wis to know what happens when the human government and the rest of everyone find out about Sesshoumaru and Kagome. soo...
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Yes! Flight attendants! I like the idea of using Sesshomaru as the steward!
lol...what a great ending!
OMG! I loved the Star Wars chapter!! That was too clever, and one of the funniest mental images I've ever had. Kudos! I'm going to your profile now. I'm giving you karma!!
jk (Chapter 1) - Fri 26 Mar 2010
i liked your demon park idea maybe u can make it into a full story or chapter story
Tsuki (Chapter 6) - Fri 26 Mar 2010
That was so awesome!! :D
Tsuki (Chapter 5) - Fri 26 Mar 2010
HAHA OMG!!! That was soo funny :)
OMG....that was hilarious! The best yet! Perfect....Yoda..Jaken...*snicker* Kagome should bring back a portable dvd player so they can all share the fun...:)
I think I would need a brandy too...lol. Kagome was funny in this. Great idea.
LMFAO!!! I've never seen Star Wars either, but that was hilarious! XD
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!! CLASSIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ha ha Jaken = Yoda... so not a far stretch! I love it! ha ha ha Would have loved to seen Sesshomaru's stoic mask fallen over "getting married"! Better yet.. how did Inu prevent Sesshy from killing her? Ha Ha
Tsuki (Chapter 4) - Sun 21 Mar 2010
Haha Kagome driving a cab!!!! Awesome :P I love how talkative she was. That was awesome.
lmao =x awesome
i like this, the lat one just made me want to smack inuyasha, but this is cute :3
Tsuki (Chapter 3) - Thu 25 Feb 2010
Haha that was some good stuff :D
mary (Chapter 2) - Sat 20 Feb 2010
lol! this one made me remember that gorgeous "eye candy" in singapore airlines. hehe... too bad i was 14 at the time.
got me giggling when i read this.
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