This fic turned quickly rather dark. You were able to draw a lot of emotions out of me in these last chapters. So well done! Inuyasha understands now that he has the same worth as every other living being And with this lesson Kagome has nearly finished her work. I wouldn't be surprised if she would be sent back to the future. I'm curious about Sesshoumaru's decision. Will he say his goodbyes, or will Inuyasha be able to prevent it?
I like the way you portray Sesshoumaru so far. He is a teenager and the way you let him talk and act shows that very good, and at the same time it is clear that he is still the Sesshoumaru. So well done!
I feel really sorry for what happened in the village. Though I'm a bit confused. When Kagome found him he looked like a 3 year old and now 1 year later he looks like a 6 year old ... didn't the villagers get suspicious? That is after all not normal...
Kagome is not the best actor, but I definitely had to laugh about her theatrical way! :D And Sesshoumatu better be prepared, I see it coming that Kagome will squeal in delight when she sees Jaken and hug him! :P
VS (Chapter 1) - Mon 08 Oct 2018
Hello,
I love further-into-the-past fics and I am really excited to read yours. Though when I read the wish I thought maybe you would let InuPapa live. So imagine my surprise when you sent Kagome into the past!
Speaking about the wish. There are a few grammar/spelling mistakes in this chapter. For example in the wish: "postive influence when he was *going up". I had to read this one three times to finally understand that you mean "growing up". There are a few more.
Chibi Inuyasha is just adorable and I had to laugh about Kagome's comment: chibi Inuyasha being more intelligent than grownup Inuyasha! :)
I'm usually not a big fan of the first-person perspective, but I will give your story a try! My interest is piqued. I can't wait to read the next chapters! :)
I have read almost all of your stories and this is by far my favorite i hope you continue you it even after all these years
ah!!! don't leave it like this!! I need to know what happens next! I adore all of your stories!!
Corina (Chapter 14) - Thu 12 Jan 2017
Oh mano mala suerte!!!!!! Una de las historias mas interesantes y pues seguir?????
Por favor!...que pasa despues? ....con una Kagome invalida, un Inuyasha tan joven y el peligro de la sociedad Yokay que no acepta las posible relaciones con sesshomaru?
Undate. ...despues de tanto tiempo, sería triste que se quedara sin terminar!
Eva (Chapter 14) - Sun 11 Sep 2016
I've just recently discovered this story and read it straight through. I've really enjoyed it. I will have to trust in you and believe that none of your stories will go unfinished forever.
Please complete this fanfiction it's so good! I'm dying to know how it will all end!
How many years has pasted at this point, and how old is Kagome now, is she ageing at all? Just curious so I can keep it in my head while reading.
I physically need more of this!!! I have to know what happened please update soon.
Please.oh please continue!
Absolute love
Great chapter, Maya Angelou passed away, keep it coming.
How God Created Mother
God took the fragrance of a flower, The majesty of a tree, The gentleness of a morning a dew The calm of a quiet sea, The beauty of a twilight hour The soul of a starry night The laughter of the rippling brook, The grace of a bird in flight, Then God fashioned from these things A creation like no other, And when His masterpiece was through, He called it simply...MOTHER.
Happy Mother's Day!
Rachael (Chapter 13) - Wed 30 Apr 2014
This story is awesome!! The characters are very well thought out and I get completly sucked into the story. I can't wait till the next chapter!
Loveyaa (Chapter 13) - Sat 05 Apr 2014
I don't know why she wouldn't be brought back to her own time, with better medicine. Maybe since she can't be moved. It is a hard injury to deal with and ones emotions probably are everywhere. Interesting that she decided to take it out on Sesshoumaru though. I can't wait to see what happens next and if she gets better :)
omg i read these chapters so far in one sitting...well i was on the floor... i cant really review without sounding repetitive because the whole storry is amazing. the dialogue is very well written, as is the story, plot, backgrounds and the like. the characters, well they dont have any apparent grammatical flaws (know what i mean?) and they and everything else flows very well. i have read some of your other fics and this is just as great. i hope that you'll update soon in life doesnt get in the way once again, love it!
Kae (Chapter 13) - Fri 04 Apr 2014
Lovely! I'm very glad to see this continued! Normally I'm not one for first person storytelling, but you do it very well.
All the chapters are stupid and dumb, April Fools!
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