Beautiful this chapter was awesome! I love that you are making there relationship more complex now. It saddens me that she hates him now, men are so stubborn! lol Great job and can't wait to see what you have in store for them next! Please update soon. :)
NOOOOO!!! No hating, Kagome, no hating!! :( Awwww. this was a sad one...somehow I hate the idea of them drifting further and further apart, and hate it even more that there are men whose company she would prefer to his (i.e. Inuyasha, Kouga, etc.) How sad, really :(
I hope it would all get better for them soon! And hopefully, they can work around the damn social rules.
Good job as always, my dear!! I am loving this despite what I've said.
Poor Kagome, poor Inuyasha, poor Sesshoumaru.... You nearly brought me to tears with this chapter, the anguish here really got to me, brilliant! If a story reduces me to wanting to cry about the unfairness of it all then I know i'm reading something good. Thanks for the update!
Another awesome chapter Beautiful! Can't wait to see what happens next! :)
Dear BeautifulMorningSun, no words can describe my happiness upon seeing an update from you! Gosh, this really made my day/night. You see, it is almost 4am at where I am (Singapore) and I was rushing through this evil political science essay which I have to complete by Friday. I am dead tired and thought I should just give up and go to bed, but then a little voice in my head told me to check my email and VOILA. There it was, the new chapter alert for "Bloody Kisses"! Thank you so much!! And well...the rest is history, and now I find myself at the reviews page.
Once again, excellent chapter there. Sesshoumaru is being the stubborn boy we all love him for, albeit at poor Kagome's expense. That girl needs to be reassured, though I have to add that I laughed out loud when she referred to herself as dinner. It reminded me strangely of "The Land Before Time", in which the little t-rex named Chomper sang the song "Friends for Dinner" but LOL that is just something REALLY random. (I must be getting too tired) I really hope Sesshoumaru responds to Kagome's feelings soon enough, especially now that she has come clean with her feelings for him (to herself, that is). Your portrayal of Inuyasha was amazing too; I like the way you kept him in character without making him the ungrateful, IQ and EQ-challenged brute which many stories unfortunately do. Well done as always!
I am really glad my review gave you encouragement but at the same time, I am also very sorry for making you cry :( But I understand how important encouragement is to writers - sometimes one just needs that bit of reassurance to go further. I mean, I am no expert, but I've written a few stories here on Dokuga and FF.net and I understand the power of reviews. You deserve all the encouragement and more!! :)
Off to dreamland for now, take care!
Sophie (Chapter 7) - Tue 06 Apr 2010
Wah what a drama! It will hold me on my toes until next chapter will be up. I really love your story and it's that much shoking, since I'm not actually a vampire fan. Not to offend you.
I was just wondering about previous chapter, the moment where Kagome was reading Emma the way it was described reminded me about the movie "you have a mail" or sth like this with Meg Ryen and Tom Hanks. Were you perhaps inspired by that movie? Meg was describing Pride and Prejudice in that scene.
I'm so happy Inuyasha and Kagome are building a relationship! It also sounds like Sesshoumaru wouldn't mind marrying Kagome, that's a relief but it seems there is something stopping him, perhaps he thinks Kagome wouldn't want that? Thanks for updating and I hope to see more soon!
Dear BeautifulMorningSun, I discovered this amazing story last night, and I took 2 hours to read all 6 chapters of pure goodness. Your writing style was perfect; simple yet powerful, which allows the reader to read comfortably and appreciate what you have to tell. On top of that, I understand it was the very cliche theme of vampires+humans and so on, but you delved into such great detail and made it dramatic, sexy, loving while completely realistic by writing out the setting so skillfully. And anything that involves blood play is just too sexy, and LOL, I am loving it. You gave me such an excellent read; I'd be an ingrate if I didn't even bother to drop a review. (which takes only 5 min, as compared to the amount of time that goes into a good piece of writing)
I also appreciated the fact that you created a social setting for them - it made their relationship very real indeed. No fluffy girl-meets-guy, WHAM, fall in love-kinda scenario. Excellent work there! I hope you keep up the good work and churn out more chapters soon, because i simply cannot wait.
Till the next chapter, take care!
What happened? I've stopped getting alerts when you post new chapters<------------- is why I haven't reviewed in a while. Anyhow, poor Kagome the Vampire equivalent of highschool indeed. I feel sorry for Kagome, if Sesshoumaru feels that passionately about half breeds then I guess trying to have a future relationship is going to be a picnic. Sesshoumaru's avoidance is making me petulant! He needs to go and see Kagome again and, I think he was kinda selfish,not telling her what drinking from her twice would mean for her.
hopuchan (Chapter 6) - Sat 03 Apr 2010
oops! in my review i meant she WOULD'VE chosen the same path not WOULDN'T...oopsy!
hopuchan (Chapter 6) - Sat 03 Apr 2010
wow! i was wondering how you were going to incorporate inuyasha. poor kagome! stuck in vamp junior high labeled a slut. while she may not care about what the others think of her, is she not a bit upset that she's in this predicament b/c of sess? knowing kags, she prolly wouldn't chosen the same path anyways but isn't she upset that sess never told her the full consequences? its nice to see kouga portrayed as a friend and not trying to pursue her doggedly as in many other fics.
can't wait for more chapters!
ahhhh a cilffy?! noooooo! Great story so far! Can't wait for the next chapter! :)
loveyaa (Chapter 6) - Sat 03 Apr 2010
I am quite looking foward to the next chapter. When I first started to read this I was a little iffy bout you really have made this your own. I am in it for the ride and can't wait til next time :)
Sophie (Chapter 6) - Sat 03 Apr 2010
How nice that Inuyasha is in this too! I was wondering if we would meet someone else except Kouga. Now I'm waiting for the next chapter, after all Kagome get into acction :)
Wow! This is a great story so far. :) Please update soon!
hopuchan (Chapter 5) - Tue 30 Mar 2010
i really like your writing style. this story has me hooked! i didn't think i'd care for another sesshoumaru as vampire story but i'm thoroughly enjoying this tale.
Sophie (Chapter 5) - Tue 30 Mar 2010
Awww.. that scene with Hiroko was so kawaiii!!! Bad word to use in the rather dark story, but what can I say it's true! Really good chapter!
Aura (Chapter 2) - Thu 25 Mar 2010
Reminds me of Vampire Knight
Sophie (Chapter 4) - Thu 25 Mar 2010
I'n soo happy Sesshoumaru won't sleep in the coffin, it would be creepy! Great chapter!
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