oh. my. god. Hands down my fave drabble, I've ever read! I'm impressed you were able to pull it off so well in exactly 100 words. The point of these drabble nights is to help strengthen our skills as writers, and challenge us, WHILE having a really good time. You really nailed this one. The image of Sesshomaru trying to get peanutbutter off the roof of him mouth will forever be etched into my mind.
The power of peanut butter, indeed. I bet that this will be the last time (or until the next time Kagome needs a laugh) that she gives him peanut butter and if he was anything like my own dog with peanut butter, he won't resist it next time, either. It was very amusing and I thought very well done. I enjoyed reading it.
Mia (Chapter 1) - Thu 29 Jul 2010
First off, great job with originality. I haven't seen peanut butter used in a fic so far and I'd like to think I've read enough fics to be able to say that legitimately.
Second, cute execution. I like how it was short yet kept a bit of suspense until you learn what Kagome is talking about.
All in all, a great little fic.
First, I would like to say that I like the creative word choice. It is the first time I've heard of the word "Gurn" and its synonymous correlation to the word "grimace". So kudos to you. :)
Second, you lead up to the conclusion very well. I had not anticipated that the substance he was having trouble with was peanut butter.
Lastly, I hope you continue. The first prompt was good, it would be great to see more!
-Gabrielle
Kerii (Chapter 1) - Sun 04 Jul 2010
Haha, dogs and peanut butter, classic. I do like this a lot and hope you keep working on it!
*dies* Sesshoumaru getting peanut butter stuck on the roof of his mouth - great mental image! Makes me wonder, though - how did it get there?
Ikaru (Chapter 1) - Thu 20 May 2010
lol...Not even a demon can match the awesome power of peanut butter...tee hee...Very cute drabble, well done :D
Hairann (Chapter 1) - Wed 12 May 2010
Hehe behold the power of peanut butter over dogs, and apparently dog demons as well. Very cute drabble :).
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