This was a very cute drabble, and the definition at the end was very helpful. Well done!
quite enjoyable! I also appreciated the deffinition at the end. I don't think I've seen that done before and for me it was useful!
Dragoness (Chapter 1) - Sat 06 Nov 2010
Very cute. The sight of Sesshomaru at any time would be distracting but in a suit I think I'd faint. Hope you add another drabble I would like to see where this goes.
Hairann (Chapter 1) - Sat 06 Nov 2010
Hehe very cute drabble and was going to ask what a loggia was, but you answered that at the end so yay! :). Very nicely done.
Short, sweet and cute...I like it! For what you wrote it fit the title of one-shot perfectly ^-^ and it was very well written. Though one thing did stand out to me...when you put the word Loggia in Bold, to me it seems to detract from the reading. But other then that I really liked this and want to read more of your writings!
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