but it was an accident he cant blame himself poor shippo anyways this is a great story keep up the great work i hope to read more soon ^_^
wonderful begining!=) i realy like the personal journy aspect, rather than her suddenly gaining super powers with out realy working for them, and no common sense to go with. I can't wait to see how this plays out. please post more soon.
Lexie (Chapter 4) - Wed 02 Jun 2010
cuz birds are normally messengers
please update!!
Gads!! I cannot believe I misspelled pilgrimage in my previous review! That's what I get for not proofreading.
I agree with Black Light Brightness. It does sound like Shippo has hid himself in Kagome's backpack. I don't blame him. He'd miss her and worry about her. Besides this pilgrimidge may be good for him, too. He is on the edge of growing up.
I'm glad she's dressing properly since this is for her miko powers. I also believe it will help her as a woman and a human.
AWE!!!!! he's a stowaway... thats so awesome!!! please continue the story soon it's already got me hooked!
Kukuro (Chapter 3) - Mon 31 May 2010
It's great, again!1 ^^
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I have always wished that Kagome had been slowly made stronger in the anime by letting her train physically and mentally. The writers always kept her weak and yelling for help. That makes me like the plot of this story. I'm excited to go along with her in her quest to become what she was meant to be and am curious to see what Sesshoumaru's role in this will be. It will definitely be a learning experience for him by doing the pilgrimage with her. Gaining respect is part of any pilgrimage so that means she'll have to dress to fit her station and for the era she's in. Showing off a lot of skin was looked down upon in females then. I'll never understand why the writers kept her in modern clothes and such a short skirt where any movement would likely show her panties. Of course, that doesn't mean she can't wear modern underclothes since they will be hidden such as some of the items her mother was picking out. teehee.
This is an intriguing premise to what promises to be a fun journey in the form of a fiction. The opening scene is brilliantly descriptive and gives an active involved feel that motivated me to go 'yeah, this'll be good' the intensity of the chase scene you laid down seemed to communicate not only the tense reality of the situation but also how repetitive this seems to be for Kagome, the rest just got better. I look forward to seeing the rest of this promising fiction, and as for stories that deviate away from the main plot, I'm all for them!
I love it so far. ^^
dayna (Chapter 2) - Sun 30 May 2010
I think I really like where this is going. A journey across Fuedal Japan so Kagome can become a better miko. Verrrry interesting! I cant wait to see how Sessy gets thrown into the mix.
Adriana (Chapter 2) - Sun 30 May 2010
I really like this so far. :) its to seem like on of those stories I'll go back to many times after its finished. :) so hurry up and finish it so I can read it again and again and again. ^_^
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