I could see the evil, cunning side of Kagome working restlessly since she caught Sesshomaru in the crowd. LOL.
I was a bit disappointed that you have no more chapters, but okay... at least Inuyasha knew that he would not, ever, get Kagome back. Take that, you cheater! HMPH
I really love Alicia Keys and her song "A Woman's Worth"! So, don't be surprised if I told you I squealed when I realized what Kagome was going to sing. I thought the song fit perfectly with this plot. It portrayed her hurt towards Inuyasha's betrayal, and at the same time telling others *cough* Sesshomaru *cough* that a real man would know her worth *cough date her *cough*.
I was a bit confused when I read that Kagome felt so heart broken and betrayed by Inuyasha...but she had affections for Sesshomaru all this time. I thought that was a bit...hmm...well...in a way...she was doing the same thing as Inuyasha...righ? That is just my opinion though. Or perhaps you could add in a few more details about her affections towards Sesshomaru to ease the readers into understanding Kagome's feelings.
I really enjoyed reading this, and wonder if this is a one-shot? This story is listed 'uncompleted' so I wonder if you will continue to write more. I am curious to see where this story will go.
Well done, and I can assure you that I didn't find many mistakes even though you did not have a beta reader for this. Great job.
