Lovely ^_^ It's nice to get some informaiton about the family, so these last few chapters were very enjoyable. I particularly liked chapter 41, especially the line "When a person expresses anger, they are, in a sense, revealling themselves". That was very insightful. You always do a good job of balancing deeper issues with charming comedy. It's like a rich chocolate cake with fluffy marshmellow frosting on top, hehe ^_^ I love it. Keep up the good work.
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Thank you for updating~! I loooooove~ this fic <3 More more more please~ My birthday is on Wednesday (15th) I'd love to read more on that day if you have time <3
You have such a unique way of writing that makes me squee with joy. Keep it up!!!
you're a hoot! this was hilariously funny!
REDWOLF (Chapter 42) - Sun 12 Dec 2010
I just wonder what will happen after her trial period's up? Great chapter!
"Inuyasha resents Sesshoumaru." Izayoi said, and continued with a humorless smile on her face. "The brother with the silver spoon born in his mouth. He knows that I was a mistress, but he looked up to his father so much… it would crush him to know that, in the end, his father didn't take care of him at all."
I loved Izayoi's explanation as to why she has not told Inuyasha that Sesshoumaru is supporting Inuyasha and Izayoi. Inuyasha resents Sesshoumaru and ssumes that his father left them money to live. Actually their father left them nothing and did not take care of them Sesshoumaru is taking care of them. Your characterization of Izayoi is wonderful. It is so good that I have nominated it for a Feudal Association award and will nominate it for an Inuyasha Fanguild Award. Keep up the
I am so loving this story. It is fresh and funny and fun. However, I've noticed that you've been confusing verbs and tenses, using present tense when past tense is more appropriate or vice versa. I've noted a few examples of it below. I hope this may help you.
Izayoi [has] had said all that she was going to say.
She [hasn't] hadn't been anything... but herself.
I [had] have been so afraid for him, so worried.
He grew up sharing his mother's understanding
Sesshoumaru [would] has never have done that before.
AmberEyesOMine (Chapter 41) - Fri 10 Dec 2010
(too lazy to log back in!) you, are a wonderful wonderful person! really, i <3 you for this! thank you thank you thank you for sharing!
Ack! you just managed to woobie-fie Sess more thoroughly in one short drabble then anywhere else I've seen....
Don't know if I should huggle you for sheer writing genius or huggle Sess for what the aforementioned genius is putting him through.
Omgosh that is so heart-breaking! This story is amazing! It has everything, drama, humour, romance... Please keep writing!
-LavB
I liked this chappie! I never even thought of Taisho not loving Sesshy! :{ super sad!
L-desu (Chapter 40) - Mon 06 Dec 2010
oh that's so sad! (T_T) poor Sesshy-pooh!
interesting thing Kagome just said... I wonder what she's refering to >-> hmmm
now i really want to know why izayoi's family disowned her...becuase she slept with Taisho while unmarried?
Oooo. Still waters run deep! Izayoi has a little ho in her, who knew? lol I'm j/k. I enjoyed the last two chapters. Particulary the way Kagome messed with his laptop (little fat Buyo's? Adorable.). And it's interesting to find out more information about Sesshoumaru. I'm really enjoying this story. You have a great sense of humor and it comes out in your writing. Keep up the good work!
Sigh, why? Oh why is it that rich doofuses have kids outside marriage and then don't give a damn about the child's future and feelings? Inuyasha seems well-provided for...but NOT well cared for. Does it sort of escape their common sense that the kid is human and might just grow up with a ginormic grudge against the legitimate child? Simply for being born on right side of the blanket?
Wow! Each chapter gets better and better. I'm hooked on this story like a darned fish!
REDWOLF (Chapter 38) - Tue 30 Nov 2010
Woe.....Izayoi sure just tells it like it is and seems proud. Well, I wonder what Sesshoumaru's mother thinks of her? Of course Sesshoumaru's mother is a true b*tch. Kagome got her hands full with these people and Sesshoumaru thinks poor Kagome is messed up.
What a story...I think it's FANTASTIC!!!
Look forward to the next update and the war of Sess and Kagome, only a woman like Kagome can handlle Sesshoumaru ;)
Your the BEST!
ah! *cringes* 'had went' and 'had got'? Not out of the mouths of Sesshomaru and his mother! Just 'went' is perfectly acceptable in the first instance, though 'had gone' would work as well. Almost anything is better than 'had got' ... I suppose 'had gotten' would be passable but still it is in decidedly poor form. Those words make them sound like Inuyasha...
Sorry to go all grammar-nazi on you like that. I've been reading the drabbles comprising this story tonight and really enjoying them. *sheepish grin* Those lines just caught me blazingly off-guard. Sometimes I can overlook things like that better than others... just not when I'm derailed like that.
I AM highly enjoying these little insights regardless. ^_^ Such a cute and entertaining story notion! I love that it is all because of Inuyasha's prank. It is also highly amusing to imagine Sesshomaru as a messy home kind of person. *laughs*
Thanks for writing!
NA (Chapter 37) - Mon 29 Nov 2010
AHAHHAH silly Izayoi!!!!! Housewives aahhahaha
Love it so far! And the chapter sizes are perfect for my attention span...
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