Sesshoumaru really needs to keep a tighter rein on his credit cards XD Poor Sesshoumaru going through so much torture. Is it bad I love it so much?
Ha! I was right about him saying 'I do' to the person that delievered to be a bad thing! This was a wonderful chapter, though I noticed one small mistake. I apologize if this is what you attended and I'm just seeing things, but where it says '“I did not make this purchase. My younger brother is and, child though he is, I will not be held accountable for it.” Instead of 'My younger is and-' I think it should be 'My younger brother did' That's the only thing I noticed, and as stated before it is just a small one. Again, good job on this chapter and story so far!!
So not Sesshoumaru to show so many emotions to someone he does not know. Yet, at the same time his though process is exactly Sesshoumaru. Amusing chapter :)
hah, I'm suprised that Sesshoumaru wasn't the least bit suspicious when it kept stating 'divorce' also now that I think about it, I'm surprised he didn't reject that package ecspecially when the woman who delievered it asked if he would treat her like his bride etc. Great job on this chapter too, the Miroku being the contact for this part made me laugh.
Wonderful job on this story so far! I'm already addicted XD. Though it is hard to imagine Sesshoumaru having messy living conditions. It is a new take on him, which I am enjoying so far! Though I think maybe he shouldn't have said 'I do' when she had asked him that question. Good job, keep up the good work!
Tsuki (Chapter 7) - Wed 25 Aug 2010
This story rocks :D
kat (Chapter 7) - Wed 25 Aug 2010
you probaly already put this in the story but i dont remember...6 months? til what she goes back or?! and cant wait for more^^
L-desu (Chapter 6) - Mon 23 Aug 2010
oh i just it when ppl torture poor Sesshy-cakes! loved this one.
*cathstar (Chapter 5) - Sat 21 Aug 2010
I don't like Zettai Kareshi either D: Or any of the author's other series. I couldn't get into them; but this I like :D
Rest assured, I will be a faithful reader :3
KitKat (Chapter 5) - Sat 21 Aug 2010
Haha I love this :)
Poor Sesshomaru but I guess, this has to happen so he becomes not such a icicle.
L-desu (Chapter 5) - Sat 21 Aug 2010
oh i love this! can't wait to read more!
Like a good and loyal reader, I should have reviewed every single chapter that you wrote. I adored it that much. It was simple, sweet, clear, and amusing. It flows well, words fit properly, and it just teases the reader to continue to the next chapter. Even now, while writing this review, I am wishing that there were dozens more chapters to read. I could never, ever pull off such lighthearted writing. So, in a sense, I appreciate that ability in others, including yourself. I applaud you in producing something so commendable. Please, continue.
Thanks!
-Gabrielle
FREAKING ORIGINAL ! I LOVE IT !
jojo661538 (Chapter 4) - Thu 12 Aug 2010
hehehe poor sesshoumaru keep up the good work i hope to read more soon ^_^
Aww this is adorable, and it reminds me of the shoujo manga Zettai Kareshi (Absolute Boyfriend)~ How cute!
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