OOOOOOHHH!!! The office, huh? Can't wait to see what happens. Update soon, please! :)
I liked your story very much. It was erotic and highly descriptive and also bounced along with a real sense of joyousness in your words. You described the thick erotic atmosphere of the club extremely well, the lust there was almost palpable, you could cut it with a knife.
Lovely description of both Kagome and Sesshoumaru. I could see her so vividly as she first danced at her pole and then in front of Sesshoumaru. By focussing on Sesshoumaru's eyes you really made an intenseness about him, you condensed his thoughts and lust into that focal point of his eyes. You handle the main points that draw the reader in extremely well. With the greatest respect, if you gave a tiny little polish to your spelling this wonderful story would be just a tiny bit easier to read. I hope you are not offended because it is certainly not my intention.
I adored this, so, so well done. I thank you for your fine efforts.
Nyuka (Chapter 6) - Wed 25 Aug 2010
well at least you update....hehe... I so happy they are in love.... but I wonder what the problem will be hmmmmmmm.........Nyuka
Sunset Senshi (Chapter 6) - Wed 25 Aug 2010
That was cute I just wish the chapters were a little longer ;( lol but all in all great story !
I got a message saying there was a chapter 6 posted but none showed up, just thought you should know incase it needs fixed.
tiana (Chapter 5) - Tue 24 Aug 2010
woooooooowwwww i rlly love how itz goin cant wait to c more
Sunset Senshi (Chapter 5) - Mon 23 Aug 2010
nice chapterrrr again can't wait for chapter six to be up ;)
Neva (Chapter 5) - Mon 23 Aug 2010
boo, for some reason, i see nothing for chapter five, no writing at all
and Yay! another halestorm fan!! I actually just saw them live for the second time saturday evening, got to meet them and everything. Lizzy the singer is SO NICE!
This story is so good!!! I love that just because she's a dancer, doesn't mean that she's a whore. In most stories, if a female character is portrayed as a dancer, then they end up being whores, but I glad that she isn't. It lets her relationship with Sesshomaru move at a realistic pace. If they just jumped into bed together, that connection wouldn't be there. So, congrats on the story! I have really enjoyed it so far, and I am looking forward to the next part!
Sunset Senshi (Chapter 4) - Sat 21 Aug 2010
Faithfully awaiting the next installment :)
tiana (Chapter 3) - Fri 20 Aug 2010
cant wait to c watz nxt update soon plz
Sunset Senshi (Chapter 3) - Fri 20 Aug 2010
Yet again another gorgeous installment . I'm awaiting the rest :) pwahahaha wow Sesshomaru is in for a surprise when he finds out the truth about her huh ? Kagome Kagome why is it no matter what you do you still come off as pure ?
tiana (Chapter 2) - Wed 18 Aug 2010
i rlly enjoyed thiz i hope u add some more chapters to this story
KitKat (Chapter 2) - Wed 18 Aug 2010
This is some great stuff! Keep it comin! :D
WONDERFUL JOB ! I loved it :)
I enjoyed how sly Kagome was XD
update soon~!
Sesshy's Grrrrrl (Chapter 1) - Thu 12 Aug 2010
OMG!!!! I think my toes curled. LOL That was S-E-X-Y!!!
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