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KyraTekak (Chapter 7) - Sun 29 Aug 2021

Loving the story 


Kai Wolf (Chapter 7) - Fri 17 Apr 2015

Hojo should have died. Keep up the good work.


Katrina Kee (Chapter 7) - Fri 06 Sep 2013

The mystery guests might be bad news for Kagome! Hojo is sooooo dead in my book! Please update soon!


Katrina Kee (Chapter 7) - Thu 01 Aug 2013

I have eoyed this story so much! Please update as soon as possible!


InuLuna of The Moon (Chapter 7) - Fri 03 Aug 2012

Oh my gosh! You got to update! lol


Rose Haven (Chapter 7) - Sat 25 Jun 2011

Hihi I really am enjoying this fic and csnt wait for more chapters!!! PLease hurry back to ths fic!!!!


MLMonty (Chapter 7) - Sat 21 May 2011

I'm curious to see what you come up with for Kagome to quiet Hojo.


Azurena (Chapter 7) - Tue 05 Apr 2011

Wahhhhh!!!! *Loves* Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeease update this story! Please please PLEASE! I absolutely adore it!


Tracey (Chapter 7) - Sun 06 Mar 2011

so far i love it plz update soon i really wont to no wat happens next


Thorn (Chapter 7) - Thu 30 Dec 2010

So far I love love love this story! Chapter 8 hasn't come very soon though *pouts*


kagsesskyo (Chapter 7) - Mon 15 Nov 2010

I really liked this chapter. The suspense is killing me!!! I can't wait to find out when everyone else knows about Kagome and Sesshomaru. And I wonder who the "guests" are going to be? Please update soon!


Kamille (Chapter 7) - Wed 03 Nov 2010

keep writing it is soooo good


Ceysna (Chapter 7) - Thu 14 Oct 2010

Poor Kags... I hope Sesshy is all healed, cause it looks like they might have to make a speedy get-away.

Thanks for the updates!! Please keep them coming!


Saholia (Chapter 7) - Thu 14 Oct 2010

Such a sweet sweet story so far :) I can't wait to see who these guests are and if Hojo will get to tell anyone :/


KEdakumi (Chapter 7) - Wed 13 Oct 2010

Oooo... I can't believe she's going back like nothing happened.  So oblivious. You know Hojo's gonna talk like she is possessed or something. Can't wait for the next chapter.


Tsuki (Chapter 7) - Wed 13 Oct 2010

Yay :) You updated!!!! :D

I am so happy Sesshy asked Kagome to be his mate!

I can't wait to see what happens next!


Tsuki (Chapter 6) - Fri 01 Oct 2010

Great update! :D It is really interesting that added Inuyasha!

I loveee this story, keep up the good work!


ChaoticReverie (Chapter 2) - Fri 01 Oct 2010

A couple of missing commas and a spelling error or two, but no glaring errors. Everything is progressing nicely. Good job.

The only thing that threw me off a little was when she's heading back to the village to gather supplies, and you wrote 'Kagome skipped along the path back to the village with vigor, in such a trance she’d been in, she hadn’t realized she’d traveled so far from the village.' The part that reads 'in such a trance she'd been in,' is a little off, in my opinion. I understand what you're trying to say, but the way it's worded doesn't make sense. Not saying you've gotta change anything, but it interrupts the flow a bit. Even putting 'having been in such a trance' instead (or something of that nature) would make it a lot smoother.

Don't take that the wrong way. It's constructive criticism, I'm not bashing the quality of your work or anything. It's a good read.


ChaoticReverie (Chapter 1) - Fri 01 Oct 2010

So far it looks great! Interesting premise, and good flow. Very valid points made here; the whole human/demon rivalry is just a bunch of contradictory BS.

Props, hon!


Gothic Lust (Chapter 5) - Fri 24 Sep 2010

I like it, please update soon


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