I think your story is really awesome!!!! I lOve it!! please continue to keep writing because you have quite a knack for it. I love the suspense? Like who is the shy spirit I don't know about yet ? Is it the father of the female spirit? And i really enjoy kagome's interactions with Naraku. It's a really good and unexpected twist. An original way of getting his character into the story. Have him possess Sesshomaru? Priceless!! And it's really cool too cuz now i get to have my Sesshomaru AND Naraku fix. I have a weird crush on both of them,lol. And really? Mirokou of all people has to catch kAGS IN THE ACT? Hilarious!
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I'm crazy but i was thinking about what she might look like from Sesshomaru's perspective and she probably looks like a crazy woman about to poison me, hehe. Well, I'm with Kagome and hope he doesn't hate her and that mean demon doesn't fuck up their relationship anymore than he already has. Can't wait to see what's gonna happen next. But take your time, your health is important.
REDWOLF (Chapter 35) - Fri 16 Sep 2011
I like this story :)
I can only surmise how hard it must be for you to write chapters like these. I can only liken it to my own reactions upon seeing there is a new chapter of 'Stealing Heaven' -a sort of combined joy and agony thrill that leaves me staring at the title for long seconds deciding if I dare read what lies beyond. On one hand, the story is excellent and well written and I just HAVE to know what happens and how it turns out. On the other... it's so achingly PAINFUL and honestly brings up feelings that really aren't helpful right now even more than any other time.
In the end, of course, I always read.
Now for Kagome... I hope for her sake she wrote everything down. That would really make it easier for her in the long run to make sure she says everything she really wants/needs to say in the time allotted. Otherwise, such a conversation will likely be full of ums, pauses, and awkward thoughts while considering what to say. Not good, imho.
Thanks so much for writing.
Loveyaa (Chapter 35) - Fri 16 Sep 2011
I can handle this if it gets me to where I wanna go. I think it was a nice transitional chapter. Now im ready for the really drama to get started. I wonder if Kagome will be able to get it all out and what Sesshoumaru's reaction will be. I can't wait to see what willl happen next :)
Love this chapter, I do <3. Very suspenseful
Awesome chapter! I can't wait for the next update! I hope that he believes her. I wonder what will happen next?!
Oh my gosh!! I can't even begin to imagine how this talk is going to turn out. I wonder if Nah Rah Ku will get suspicious if the tea works and makes Sesshoumaru's thoughts fuzzy.
I enjoyed reading this chapter and I can't wait for the next. I'm excited to find out what's going to happen. Thank you for your awesome writing.
First things first... YESSSSSS! AN UPDATE!!! FINALLY!!! *Happy dances*
Second... I couldn't help but laugh at the end of the chapter. Sesshoumaru must have been SO confused by Kagome's odd behavior. LOL. She made herself quite at home in his kitchen, didn't she? XD
I definitely can't wait to read the next chapter and see how their talk turns out. It won't be pretty, I imagine, and I can already envision so many ways it could screw up. Maybe Myoga's tea is a fake... or Sesshoumaru flips out... or Kagome chickens out... or Nah Rah Ku is stronger than anyone had thought so the tea didn't work... Yeah, ALL sorts of scenarios are playing in my head. Or maybe and surprisingly, it will all turn out well.
Who knows? Other than you, of course... so, I am patiently yet anxiously awaiting for the next chapter - as always!
I can't believe I didn't find this sooner!!! OMG. I love it! I am so loving this storyline. I started reading it last night and have continued to read every chance I get. I love supernatural stories even though I am a big chicken ^^ There were several times last night when I had to look over my shoulder because I was so into your writing.
You do a very good job of describing the creepiness of the site and how it is affecting Kagome. I can't wait to read the rest!
Thanks for a great read!!
GG (Chapter 34) - Sat 13 Aug 2011
omg! i've just read everysingle chapter and i could hardly stop!
you are amazing! Please Please update!
Anonymous (Chapter 34) - Tue 09 Aug 2011
keep writing please im in love with this story and it just gets deeper and deeper with the crazy demon but i hope everything works out(:
Shirahara (Chapter 34) - Mon 08 Aug 2011
=D update again! I've been following your story for a while even though I dont go on very often. It's so good and I want to know what Kagome is going to tell Sesshou. So update, cause ypu're awesome! XD
Please update soon. I cant wait to see what happens next. I love this story, it is awesome. Thanks
Loveyaa (Chapter 34) - Sun 07 Aug 2011
I see the necessity of these chapters and I think you did a nice job getting everything on the table and having the story move along. The only thing is that there is such a break in between the chapters. Though I guess that just means that whatever is going to happen next will be epic. I do still feel bad for Kagome, but I am a little surprised that she spilled so quickly to Sango and now Sango is going to tell Miroku...weird. I feel the worst for Sesshoumaru though. I wonder how he would take to having a demon spirit inside of him. Anyway I hope everything works out including with you. I can't wait to see what happens next :)
Ok srsly... chapter 33... i want to kick you right now. Totally not what i expected but admittedly not surprising. But aw man that sucks! Things are really screwed up and I just know once Sesshomaru discovers the truth things are going to get even worse, he's gonna be pissed! I just really hope that in the end everything works out and they can be together cuz yeah they kind of deserve it after the torture your putting them through. And srsly I want to kill Nah Rah Ku for doing that, poor Sessho dude. Like srsly the guy has had it rough and now it's even worse >.<
Great job and I so can't wait to see what happens next!
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