I loooove it!!! This story is getting better by the minute!!! And i like the new addition to my favorite group!! :D Go Zenzo!!!
An update! Yay! I loved your new character, Zenzo seems so sweet! Everything seems to be coming together really nice for both Kagome & Sesshomaru, but I know that this is the calm before the storm. I can't wait to see how Takuma is going to react when he finds out that Kagome is bethroded to Sess! He probably expects her to be all alone and unprotected, so this will probably not sit well with him!
I love Shippo! He is the perfect son! I know that Kagome will take good care of him. I also love that Sesshomaru is looking for oportunities to get close to Kagome and initiating contact with her! This is probably making her fall in love a lot faster. However, I wonder if he will feel love towards her. So far we know that he likes her and lusts for her, but his emotions are not clear yet, so I hope he gets to experience the full force of what being in love is.
Congratulations on getting your internet back! We were all worried that we would not see an update any time soon,so this was a nice surprise. Please update soon again! This story is too good to become lost among the hundreds that writers forget to finish or update.
i like this! it works well so far i tihnk ^_^
Tiegrsi (Chapter 8) - Wed 19 Jan 2011
I like the new chapter, although I think Kagome seems to be jumping in a little too quick; but the plot dictates it be so if her uncle is already on the hunt for her! Thanks for the update, I'll be looking forward to more! :D
I'm really liking this story! I hope you have a chance to update soon!
Have a fantastic week!
~~Mizuko~~
lara (Chapter 7) - Sat 15 Jan 2011
I am overjoyed that you have begun to update this story again & saddened that you are have problems with connecting online so that you can update again. I am dying inside to know more of what will happen next & to see the relationship between Sessh & Kagome grow. I really hope Kagome asks him about him keeping concubines & I hope she tells him that if they are to have a happy relationship as an initmate couple & future mates that she can not accept that he'll be intimate with others while she is with him & that she in no way means to offend him but if he plans to have intimate relations with other beings while they are together she would like to know sooner than later because it is basically a deal breaker for her & that although she wishes to uphold the betrothal that their parents arranged the idea of sharing her mate with others causes her mental,emotional & physical pain & that is something she can not & will not do to herself, she will not agree to a future filled with pain & that she feels she deserves better than that & would rather spend a life alone surrounded with friends & allies until she finds someone who is willing to give themself to her as completely as she is. She knows that she is unaware of how he has led his life until now but if he is serious about having a future with her but finds that he wants to continue a physical relationship with whomever he's with now or has been with in the past she only asks that he be honest with her because this is an issue she is unable to work with so if he already knows or feels that having her as a mate he wants to continue to be able to have physical relations with others she wants to know now before they become physically & emotionally involved. She wants to get to know him better & before they continue she wants to know what his opinion is on being Mated to someone & him having sexual relations with others & if he feels that when he is Mated is he okay with sharing his Mate with other men..she wants to know if he considers being Mated nothing more than an issue of power or politics & that other than having an heir does he feel that it is fine for both he & his future Mate to have other bed partners. She is not asking to be rude but so that they can be honest with each other, she has no problem telling him what she wants & finds acceptable in a future mate & only asks the same of him if they are to be betrothed then she feels it is best to start being honest with each other from the start. That really bothered me when Inuyasha said that
I really want to see them get together but now I'm curios about who this kitsune is & if he's a bad guy or a good guy. I'm really excited & nervous about what will happen next.
I can't wait to see what happens next
Tiegrsi (Chapter 7) - Sat 15 Jan 2011
I hate to say this, but I'm glad that was the last chapter for now! I would have had to stay up even longer if there were any more, and I am BEYOND tired.
I.Love.This.Story.
Your writing is amazing! The details you put in, the way you describe the characters' feelings - AMAZING. And Sessoumaru is portrayed brilliantly! I am looking forward to reading more once you have fixed your connectivity issues! I am also pleased to see a story of Kagome being a demon portrayed in a way that makes a lot of sense. I am guessing you are leaving out the necklace from the story for now because it will play an important part later? The only part of your story I am wondering about is where Souta came from...If Mrs. Higurashi was barren, is Souta also an adopted child? I hope to find out somewhere later in the plot. :) I hope to see more soon! :D
oh! inuyasha>:l *beats him with a stick* i really hope he gets his come`up`ens b/c he's a totally jerk, he threw her out of the hut? and then expects her to jsut want to coem back on top of everythign else? >:l gah stupid hanyou! welcome back! great update!
Admirable thing indeed. Well done, m’dear. Great job with the pace you’re taking here, and I enjoyed the way you had that final confrontation play out.
Silly Inuyasha, always playing the selfish pup. He’s just pouty cuz he lost his favorite chew toy. Ah well, he’d better get over it.
Can't wait for more!
WOW! Another twist to the origins of Kagome. But, I think...I like it. Black Inu, hm? Good beginning. Ok, gotta go read some chappys. If this first one is any indication, I may not be able to review again for awhile. Tend to keep reading and reading and reading..well, you know what I mean. :D Can't wait to read more!
I was wondering when that would come into light and what her reaction might be. Hmmm, I wonder how Inuyasha is going to react.
Beautiful, as usual. I thoroughly enjoyed the way you described the process of her getting used to her aura, it was wonderfully descriptive and I could practically see everything happening as I read it.
Ever eager for the next update!
iLolita (Chapter 5) - Sun 26 Sep 2010
Oh gosh I love this story!!! Please keep writting ^_^
Darrakk (Chapter 5) - Sun 26 Sep 2010
I like this story. Please keep updating so often.
Is Kagome still going to be able to sense the jewel shards? Where is Kikyou? Has Bakusaiga made its appearance yet? What of Kagura and the others? What will Sesshoumaru's mother think of this?
I love your cliff hangers, lol. The eight-sided star is like the Buddhist symbol for the eight-fold path. ^_^ Can't wait for more!!!
Heh, heh. What a way to find out you're betrothed to the Demon Lord of the West. Nice going, Miroku!
Great chapter. Love this story!
ohhhhhhhhhhhh i love this! Sesshomaru's gunna be mad! and Kagome's not going to be overly happy considering that yell =x i like that inuyasha and her almost got into a fight b/c he doestn respect her power.
helikesitheymikey! (Chapter 5) - Sat 25 Sep 2010
*snickers* I can tell that this is what Inuyasha will tell to his nieces and nephews when they ask for how their parents got together...*cackles evilly*
anyway I SO LOVED this chapter and I really wanna see what Sesshomaru's reaction is when he gets there...not to mention Kagome's...this'll be GOOD!
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
iLolita (Chapter 4) - Fri 24 Sep 2010
Oh em gee!!!! UUGGGGHHHH Not a cliffy anything but that!!!! I have to read moar :O And (tehe) Im behaving I always review!!!
NOOOOOOOOOO! BAD AUBREY!!! HOW COULD YOU LEAVE US LIKE THAT?!?!?!?!?!
One of my fav chapters so far!!!! PLEASE!! UPDATE SOON!!! :´(
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