What an interesting plot! Very neat how you got them to go back to the past to make a change in the timeline and yet was able to return to their own timeline and it continue on as it had in the beginning.

You wrote a very moving story. It made me cry, especially the middle section when I realized it was Sesshomaru's spirit watching over Kagome at the hospital and at her home. 

For someone who claims that English is their 2nd language, you write a very good story. I don't like to cry and you made me cry (A LOT) for the original Sess and Kags in this story. I really wanted those two to somehow "live" again after that horrific adventure, but your version is not only more believable but too touching for words! Keep writing fanfiction koi. You are doing a great job!

no matter how many times i read it, i still love it. keep up the great work

One word... Noein... Great anime with lots of physic's stuff and time quantum and what-not...