Very nice. I really liked this a lot. It was very inventive and new. I wish I were as creative. This flowed nicely and I loved Jaken's telling of the tale. I felt like I was back in one of Edgar Alan Poe's books. Great job.
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I really like this, and I love your style of writing! This was one of my favorite lines ---> “I'm sorry my mate, she can not be found, But it is to this manor she is bound. Leave here we shall and you'll be free, Of her haunting memory.”
Please keep up the good work, I like reading your stuff!
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