Interesting, very interesting. I know that doesn't say much but that's all I got.
This was a great story. Sad that not even Shippo remembered the one who'd cared for him as a mother. I wish there was more to this story & even though they couldn't remember her,it'd be nice if in their dreams they found themselves being smothered by the memory of intense warmth, care & love that over time brought with it the memory of her face & in time, they each recognized the being in their dreams that loved & cared for them so, was the very being Sessh tried to remind them of & had been so angry over the fact that they'd simply forgotten one who'd repeatedly tried to give her life for them.
I'm confused over how they'd forget her ,the jewel & the reason they were all together & their families dead. What happened to the rest of Kagome's soul that was used to bring Kikyo back from the dead ? When Kagome chose to leave with the jewel,why'd only Sessh & Naraku remember? What happened to Naraku's minions-Kanna,Kagura & even Kohaku ? Did Kikyo become alive again & if so, how & did it not seem odd to her (or Kaede)that her younger sister, Kaede, was now elderly??
.Just couldn't help think how they'd forgot,what changed,what memories changed ? If they ,over time remembered ? This was so great a story & yet so short ,I can't help wonder about the changes in Kagome physically,as her power grew ,changing the color of her eyes & hair & then,with the mentioning that Kagome could sense that the youkai within the jewel seemed to want the jewel restored & untainted,I wondered if it meant they were no longer evil but still youkai as Kagome could sense them as such..causing me to wonder if the reason for Kagomes physical changes & increase in power was due to the fact that she might actually be a powerful Miko youkai, making her a perfect host for the jewel to be reborn in, as the jewel was made up of miko & youkai.Then when I considered that Kagome attracted strong canine youkai it led me to hope if she was a miko youkai that she'd be an inu. I also wondered if after Sessh became her Mate did she lose or retain her Miko power (I hope she didn't lose it & the only change between them is that as her Mate her immense Miko power can no longer harm him)? I would also love to see this as a longer story.
Sorry for so many questions.I love this story
You already made them fall in love. The fact that she could be so comfortable around him after he wrecked her is proof enough. Plus, I'm a die-hard Kag/Sess fan. Whaddaya want from meh? Xp
Omg, awesome story! I wish you would continue it just a bit!
anonesque (Chapter 1) - Mon 18 Oct 2010
Not bad but Kagome's smugness took away a lot from this story. Its just not her to wave her superior strenght all over the place.
fangirl (Chapter 1) - Tue 12 Oct 2010
i loved it thanks for the story and u hit a good point too! they r narual enimies but there cute together!
O_o i think that you updated on the wrong fic! :3
Sascha-Sama (Chapter 1) - Wed 06 Oct 2010
You uploaded the second chapter onto the wrong fic.....
i LOVES this!
Fluffy (Chapter 1) - Tue 05 Oct 2010
i loved it XD awesomeness! will you do a sequel to it or anything like that?
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