MORE UPDATES, PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! LET THEM MATE SOON! KEEP "Club Hypnotic" as a title , it fits the story.
Hey, I just started reading this fic and I saw a little discrepancy. In chapter 4 you wrote "She finaly though of Shiori a sweet half demon girl" then in the next chapter you put (she's a full demon in this fic) just thought you overlooked it. I'm not sure if you were looking for constructive criticism or not but i look forward to the rest of the story.
Can't wait until the next chapter!
amy (Chapter 10) - Mon 01 Nov 2010
MMMMMMMORE UPDATES!
Love the music choices and i like how the story is going
sarah (Chapter 10) - Fri 29 Oct 2010
omg dont tell me she forgave him bc he wanted her to stay with him. oh hell no. Let her give him hell for a little bit b4 they get together for real.
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