this story is amazing! it's so detailed and nothing moves too fast. i love how you focus on the story line in addition to the romantic interest development. some people don't create a good balance and the whole story seems insubstantial. this is AMAZING!
YAAAAAAYYYYYYYY!!!! Oh My Gosh! Thank you so much for this update! I am so waiting to see what happens next. How could she have attacked her friends? I guess she was in a catatonic state and could not tell who was friend or foe? I thought she and Sess had a bond though. Anyway, it was a great chapter and I can't wait to see what's around the bend. I'm putting my edits at the bottom.
Edits:
The campus was pack(ed) with visiting miko and students taking exams.
After the first two exams students were given a break(;) now instead of the classroom students sat around varies(ious) courtyards eating lunch or studying for their next exam.
I don’t think that has changed any(,) Ship seem(ed) to always encourage it.
Those Miko(,) they are doing it again,” she brought everyone’s but Kagome’s attention to a group a(of) miko that has(d) stopped not to(o) far from where they sat.
This morning when we arrived at school(,) then in between exams(.) I think they are stalking us or something.”
I was wondering do you have a fanfiction.net account?
Why do you feel the need to torture me so? Thank you millions of times over for the update. I wonder what Kagome is really hiding? I think she is just starting to understand that it is okay to be her. Slowly but surely I think she will get there if Sess backs off a little and tries to understand. You're going to make me start over from the beginning and read it all again! Also, what is this about Inu's mom? Ashamed of her pup? Really? You have me intrigued now.
this is a really great story that i love and like very much since i first started reading it. your a really great author who wrote this really great good and wonderful story.
| Oh my gosh!! This is such a beautiful story. I know you haven't updated in a looong time, but please, please don't give up on this. This story just blew me away! With the encouragement you give me on mine, I now send back to you. Please update soon and give us more.
WhiteRose-Kurama (Chapter 17) - Thu 21 Aug 2008
| OMGs... I never knew how much abuse and suffering Kagome endured... No wonder she's the way she is now. That must have been very hard for Sess to endure.
moonlit marauder (Chapter 18) - Wed 20 Aug 2008
| OMG I totally understand and thanl you so much for the update teaser, will be waiting for the next chapter and btw sorry about all the mesages i think u recived bout single spark from me, i was worried u didnt know cause u haddent updated in 4ever.
Demonic kunoichiKagi (Chapter 17) - Tue 15 Jul 2008
| This is so good. Update soon.
moonlit marauder (Chapter 17) - Sat 12 Jul 2008
| OMG OMG I TOTALLY LOVE U I WANTED 2 SENT U A PRIVATE MESSAGE to tell u how much i totally adore ur writting and love and worship u 4 updating anyway over the gushing its a great chapter thank gods u updated now i can re-read my favourite story again lol
anyway update soon and keep up the great work cya
Sesshomaru's Loyal Servent (Chapter 17) - Sat 12 Jul 2008
| UPDATE SOON or i will go into a coma OMG this is an amazing story i just love love LOVE this story
kitty cat (Chapter 3) - Thu 05 Jun 2008
| very interesting i like the idea a look forward to reading more i like how u have protrayed kagome, KOOL!
moonlit marauder (Chapter 8) - Thu 05 Jun 2008
| just wondering if you have a alerts list where u get emailed when u post a new chapter, btw everyone on this site have usually all read the stories on ASS or Now known as sesskag.com, but when the site closes u will get alot more reviews, and im so glad u have shown ur alive
moonlit marauder (Chapter 1) - Wed 04 Jun 2008
| oh my god u updated i soo love u so much im re-reading the story all over again and keep thinking of what could happen in the next chapter u know the (hopefully coming soon) chapter 17, oh love it keep up the great work.
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