| I really liked this! I'm glad at the end you cleared up who the "other" guy was (and yes that made me happy with who it was!!). My only critique for you would be to watch your spelling errors so that it doesn't confuse people, but other than that the storyline was great and it flowed very nicely. And of course with such a great ending you can't go wrong!! LOL! Great job!! I hope you write more of this pairing (not just because it's my favorite) because you do have a nice talent for writing and I would love to be able to read more from you.
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