It's cute, but I mostly wanted to point out that your rating is way off. This thing, at most, is a T rating. Extraordinarily vague references to "enjoying a naked view" and only mentioning that Kagome is nude while bathing is not M, and most certainly not MA.

Just to say.

Its a nice little idea, though. Sesshoumaru with an iPod... wonder if anyone has done any fanart to that lol

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Awesomeness!!!!! Truthfully, i'd probably battle him to the death for my ipod.

aww very cute, I love it, very amazing!!!

keep it up, you did a great job!!! .

hugs

Megan007

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Overall it was cute.

Maybe slightly out of character, but not too bad. It moved at a fair pace and had an ending that left warm fuzzies.

There were a couple places that felt like they had small "hiccup's" in the flow of the story. Like the first switch from Kagome to Sesshoumaru's POV.

Keep writing, the more you do the easier it will be.

OK, liked it overall, you have a few spelling mistakes, shiny only has 1 n for example & important doesn't have an i, a run through a spell-checker should fix all the spelling errors. For some reason a bunch of the sentences cut in half & start again after a linespace, several sentences take up like 6 lines when they'd only take up 2 or 3 if it didn't have the odd breaks.

HAHA Perfect little story! Loved how you developed and built it up and brought it to a great moment with one word: "You".

Please write more like this charming vignette.

hu, hu... sesshoumaaru+ipod=craziness...

lol thats cute!